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Paregoric / Твою боль утолю...

I will drown your pain,
It could flow away.
Pain you try to restrain,
But it seems to betray.
 
My embrace that you sense
Doesn’t weaken with time
And we mentally dance
Using love’s pantomime.
 
I will save you from bleeding,
It can color your tears.
Heavy thoughts I am reading
Fade away with all fears.
 
If your innocent heart
Shatters to tiny pieces,
I will pick up each part,
Glue together by kisses.
 
Paregoric, I’m yours –
Killer of piercing scream.
Ragged wounds I submerse
In amour’s rapid stream.
 
I am freezing the moment,
What we feel never dies.
Pain evaporates, fervent,
But it’s done with the rise.
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This is a Russian version of the poem

Твою боль утолю,
Она сможет утечь.
Об одном я молю:
Плоть души уберечь.

Обнимая тебя,
Руки крепко смыкаю.
Мы танцуем, тая
Чувства те, что ласкаю.

Не истечь тебе кровью,
Слезы что обагряет.
Страхам ты прекословь,
Они лишь отравляют.

Если сердце твое
Разобьется небрежно,
Все осколки я склею
Поцелуями нежно.

И те раны внутри
Станут лишь жалкой тенью.
Трепетно окуну
Их в Амура теченье.

Остановим мы время,
Гибель чувства не ждет.
Боли тяжкое бремя
Камнем на земь падет.
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Paregoric, by Den Khaustov 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 29 reviews.
Robert R. Woods More than 1 year ago
Well crafted and interesting topic and exploration of the topic... a tad twisted... but most great poetry is...
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you) what is it?
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Superb comment
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Mathilde Dumas More than 1 year ago
Beautifuly written. I love it.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Ruby Campos More than 1 year ago
Great Job you did.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Peter J Brown More than 1 year ago
...and I like the way you have written about it. Nicely done Den :)
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Peter)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
tj hatton More than 1 year ago
Very well written, What we feel never dies. true.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, TJ)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Mrs..T Davis More than 1 year ago
Great writing
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Lirije Bektashi More than 1 year ago
i like it
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
MAKE KNOW TO THE WORLD THE CLASS IN THE RUSSIAN POEMS
Cindy O'Nanski More than 1 year ago
Very beautiful poem. I really love it. The only thing, I would change fades to fade in the 3rd verse. Thoughts fade, rather than thoughts fades. Otherwise, Excellent read.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you a lot, Cindy) of course, you are right
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Superb comment
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Ashok Babu More than 1 year ago
just beautiful Den
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you much, Ashok)
Ashok Babu More than 1 year ago
Den, pls visit http://www.poetry.com/poems/544010-Change-Diamante-
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Christina Peskowa More than 1 year ago
Просто поразительно!!! Ты - почти еще ребенок - а такие серьезные стихи!!! Это потрясающе)) Love you guys - вас обоих - в любом случае - без любимой - так красиво не написал бы)) ЛЮБВИ ВАМ!!!!))
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
большое спасибо за искренние пожелания)
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Superb comment
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Randy Nii More than 1 year ago
You do know how to deliver,,,ya know,,,it's tough being a guy and reviewing these,,,i know,,,after i ask her if she wants to see my etchings,,I'll swoon her with your beautiful words,,
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you a lot, Randy)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
i truely love in great piece well done friend
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you a lot, Clifton) Do you know what errors the first commenter means?
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Jon White More than 1 year ago
my favorite stanza "If your innocent heart Shatters to tiny pieces, I will pick up each part, Glue together by kisses"
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Jon)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Tejinder Singh More than 1 year ago
Reads well
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
Thank you, Tejinder)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Svetlana Rakhimova More than 1 year ago
Strong feelings, the fountain of love.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you much, Svetlana) the great review from you
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
yvonne sensing More than 1 year ago
GLUE TOGETHER BY KISSES...MY FAVORITE LINE GREAT POEM, DEN...WELL DONE
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you a lot, Yvonne) it's my favorite one too
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Ellie Fairchild 11 months ago
Reading this was an absolute pleasure. Just beautiful. 
Juliet Ligon More than 1 year ago
Your work is amazing!
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Juliet)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
As usual very profound poem. My embrace you do sense Doesn’t weaken with time And we mentally dance Using love’s pantomime. If your innocent heart Shatters to tiny pieces, I will pick up each part, Glue together by kisses. Superb, Awesome and Love it all.............
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you a lot, Asim) those verses are my favorite ones too
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
If u find time please check : http://poetry.com/poems/542421-Mystery-Unresolved-
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Dema Al-Obaidy More than 1 year ago
Paregoric, I’m yours – Killer of piercing scream. Ragged wounds I submerse In amour’s rapid stream. I am freezing the moment, What we feel never dies. Pain evaporates, fervent, But it’s done with the rise. Love it, wonderful job :)
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
Thank you a lot, Dema)
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Superb comment
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
ARUN MAZUMDER 9 months ago
well done....pl.review my poems
CLINT 16 days ago
Words flow so well 
Motherofall Nero 8 days ago

My poem is based on all of the young boys and girls and men and women, that have walked away from church and home, and were taken. Never to be found or found dead..  When your elders can't tell  you anything, this is what useually happens.


Travezure Jammine More than 1 year ago
Full of emotions flowing everywhere.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
Thanks
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Superb comment
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
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