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demons

Curious I am
to impure calls of night
to thoughts that grasp my hand
and stray me from the light


They shriek as demons will
crawl forth from satans breast
and dance in ethers stead
my heart be all but blessed


Till morn she brings the light
and shadows reappear
they steal into the shade
my demons disappear


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clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
i just noticed this poem has been reported for abuse how sad but dont worry i have copies
Poetry.com 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 48 reviews.
Joyce Carol Gibson More than 1 year ago
very good
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you very much my friend
James DeVesci More than 1 year ago
Excellent poem in so few words !
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you james
Mark Bell More than 1 year ago
Imaginative creativity this we need more of pleased
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you mark
Dema Al-Obaidy More than 1 year ago
Wonderful piece Clifton :)
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you dema my friend
Dave Ratcliffe More than 1 year ago
Clifton, I very much enjoyed this one, I had a visit from them last night though they came in the form of self doubt. Troubles they the day suppresses sometimes come to life as the mind relaxes and so comes the rem and the tossing around Love the thoughts and imagery
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you dave
Joanna Lawlor Redmond More than 1 year ago
dark and yet there is light
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you jo
Logical Nonsense More than 1 year ago
amazinggg
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you logical
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
I say it´s just another normal night.
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
For it seems most nights are like that.
Jimmy James More than 1 year ago
I can really connect with this man, the nightlife takes people over, haha. Keep up the good work brotha'.
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you jimmy
Khalil Goddard More than 1 year ago
Nicely done, plenty to think about.
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you khalil
Siddharth Singh More than 1 year ago
The dark of the night How rare it is to have your poem coming in the mandatory two
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you sid, im sorry i dont understand you my friend
Siddharth Singh More than 1 year ago
I was talking about the two poems that come and you have to review them in order to publish your poem poems
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Fine
tonya johnson More than 1 year ago
I really like this. I felt it. Felt like battle within your soul. like the good and evil. Like to read more
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you tonya
Mohammed Saad More than 1 year ago
Subject is very good, I love it.
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you mohammed
Mathilde Dumas More than 1 year ago
Night makes us more receptive but also more vulnerable. Well done Clifton.
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you mathilde
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
i myself would like to write about demons and create some metaphor, using those creatures, but it's my wish and now your poem is wonderful
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
dont let this put you off , i would love to see how you would tackle this kind of concept, thank you for reading
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
A fight with demons in your own style...Profound work , My friend Clifton. Love it.
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you asim
Randy Nii More than 1 year ago
The thoughts and images that conjure themselves when other thoughts of the day have dissipated. sometimes carrying through the night.. It's so cool that you can take any subject matter and create a scenario that is so relatable.
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
very true randy im glad you liked it my friend i appreciate your support
Tejinder Singh More than 1 year ago
brings the light - love it Pl check: http://www.poetry.com/poems/563263-Prisoner-of-conscience
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you tejinder
Donald Loudon More than 1 year ago
One of the best I have read here!
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you donald
Matityahu Rich More than 1 year ago
I'm trying to get my points up, so here is 5. I apologize for not being more thorough in my review.
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
haha your honesty is refreshing
Talin Rowe More than 1 year ago
I thought that the imagery and the words used brought out a feeling and almost timeless element that is seen only through good poetry nice job.
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you tain
tj hatton More than 1 year ago
They hide in the shadows
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you tj
Ging Alburo More than 1 year ago
Keep it up
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you ging
Norman Wilson More than 1 year ago
You have a gift that most poets aspire too. You say so much in so few word and still telling of a story with a poet's emotion. Beautiful write my new friend.
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
thank you norman
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