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Unearthly

Born innocent, she is a stranger.
Her home an abandoned place.
So far not knowing of danger,
In peacefulness she used to bathe.
 
Another world is where she’s from,
Where people’s violence never thrived.
That poor girl – white graceful swan
Is stained with blood from flesh alive.
 
The tender heart is her weak side,
It’s all exposed for a sinner.
The Devil took her for a ride
And played the role of dirty winner.
 
Full of such pure inner light,
She’s faced ambassador of darkness
That wallows in brutal fight,
Not showing a sign of kindness.
 
On Earth that devil lives inside
Of each and every human being,
Engenders ugly thoughts and guides
His host to their black revealing.
 
She feels he touched her fragile life,
Left fingerprints on virgin soul.
In spite of all she has survived,
But happiness our planet stole.




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Lorraine Lester More than 1 year ago
I write my poems to help others to smile or to think serious about their lives. I've been writing them since childhood and sometimes I write them to show others how much and how deeply my love goes
Unearthly , by Den Khaustov 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 50 reviews.
Joey Jones More than 1 year ago
This is written very well. I really enjoyed the epic feel to this. Makes you want more!
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you a lot, Joey)
Jon White More than 1 year ago
awesome story you've created
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Jon)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
You caught everything that needed to be said in this, and it flowed very well.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Jon)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Animus Vox More than 1 year ago
I saw the world as she did because of this masterful craft, and it made me hate what I saw.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
omg, thank you much, RIcky) glad that my poem was able to impress you
Animus Vox More than 1 year ago
Not only was it able to impress me, Den, but the words I started using to describe how I felt drew inspiration for my newest poem. If you'd like to read what I should be thanking you for this is the link to it: http://www.poetry.com/poems/588517
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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I am Me More than 1 year ago
deep and meanigful , so many beautiful lines ...
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Randy Nii More than 1 year ago
i thought this was a very well written piece,,i seen it on FB
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Randy)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Stacy Gardner More than 1 year ago
Left finger prints on her virgin soul! Beautiful poem and well executed!
Stacy Gardner More than 1 year ago
Pease read and rate when you have a chance! http://poetry.com/poems/577312-Old-friend
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Stacy)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Mc Dreamer More than 1 year ago
;-)
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Christina Peskowa More than 1 year ago
excellent and deep work!
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Christina)
Christina Peskowa More than 1 year ago
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ie-HoafZw68
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Drey Conn More than 1 year ago
I reread this probably a dozen times, it is so beautiful. It flows well and has fantastic rhythm. The words reached in and touched my very soul. Definitely my new favorite poem.
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Khalil Goddard More than 1 year ago
Good writing.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Khalil)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Kseniya Mironova More than 1 year ago
looks like it's a birth of new saga
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
love you)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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angel moon More than 1 year ago
Sad and compelling. You should be proud!
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you) guess I am
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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joy balan More than 1 year ago
an amazing poem ! great one Den!
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Joy)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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sara irizarry More than 1 year ago
well done
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Sara)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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James Barnett More than 1 year ago
I loved this piece, "talk about a powerful well crafted poem"...woah just lovely
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you a lot, James)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Mathilde Dumas More than 1 year ago
This is a profound poem, perfectly written. I love it.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you much, Mathilde)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Ian More than 1 year ago
this is brilliant story
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Ian)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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tj hatton More than 1 year ago
The purity of innocence stained by evils dark influence.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, TJ)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Paul Harmon E. More than 1 year ago
satan is the enemy to man
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Paul)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Nasaura Miles More than 1 year ago
This Was Amazingly Beautiful !
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Nasaura)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Ashok Babu More than 1 year ago
excellent one Den pls visit http://www.poetry.com/poems/579092-This-Poet-
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Ashok)
Ashok Babu More than 1 year ago
pls visit http://www.poetry.com/poems/583479-The-Artist
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Absolutely fantastic poem Den, just loved it.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you a lot, Asim)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Ludy Bührs More than 1 year ago
This one survived, the poor molested student in India didn't...
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Ludy)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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Farida Amin More than 1 year ago
profound nicely crafted
Farida Amin More than 1 year ago
Please review these poem of today http://poetry.com/poems/581168 http://poetry.com/poems/581096 http://poetry.com/poems/581076
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Farida)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
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