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A Women's Desire

A Women's Desire

I love you, you said.
I love you too, I replied
Then the words died.
Too tired, too used,
Too insignificantly light,
They fused...
 And disappeared into night.

If only I'd been a little more demanding,
A little more commanding,
Then perhaps you'd have asked me,
"How can I love thee?" instead.

For I desperately wished
For your lingering kiss
That would uplift my soul
In the depths of the night,
As the wind in the folds of a kite. 

I hungered for your breath on my neck 
As soft, as light, as a butterfly's flight
Mixed with caresses so bold,
They enveloped my whole
within the sweetest delights.

But most of all that night,
I longed for words 
That would tell me 
Not only you loved me,
But heard me and saw me.
Words thickened with desire
that said...
Your smell entices me,
Your body excites me
The way it fits into mine
So blissfully divine
There exists no place, no time.

Oh, if only I'd been
A little more demanding,
A little more commanding,
I'd have turned to you and bluntly said,
"Ask me how...
How you can love me, instead?" 
 
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Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
I've been away a long time. Thanks for all your wonderful reviews on poem "A Women's Desire". 
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Universal to women, educational to men... A must read
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Universal to women, educational to men... A must read
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Universal to women, educational to men... A must read
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Universal to women, educational to men... A must read
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Universal to women, educational to men... A must read
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Universal to women, educational to men... A must read
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Universal to women, educational to men... A must read
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
I love you, you said. I love you too, I replied Then the words died. Too tired, too used, Too insignificantly light, They fused... And disappeared into night...
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
I love you, you said. I love you too, I replied Then the words died. Too tired, too used, Too insignificantly light, They fused... And disappeared into night...
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
I love you, you said. I love you too, I replied Then the words died. Too tired, too used, Too insignificantly light, They fused... And disappeared into night...
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
I love you, you said. I love you too, I replied Then the words died. Too tired, too used, Too insignificantly light, They fused... And disappeared into night...
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
I love you, you said. I love you too, I replied Then the words died. Too tired, too used, Too insignificantly light, They fused... And disappeared into night
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
I love you, you said. I love you too, I replied Then the words died. Too tired, too used, Too insignificantly light, They fused... And disappeared into night
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
I love you, you said. I love you too, I replied Then the words died. Too tired, too used, Too insignificantly light, They fused... And disappeared into night
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
I love you, you said. I love you too, I replied Then the words died. Too tired, too used, Too insignificantly light, They fused... And disappeared into night
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
I love you, you said. I love you too, I replied Then the words died. Too tired, too used, Too insignificantly light, They fused... And disappeared into night
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
universal to women, educational to men
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
universal to women, educational to men
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
universal to women, educational to men
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
universal to women, educational to men
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
I love you, you said. I love you too, I replied Then the words died. Too tired, too used, Too insignificantly light, They fused... And disappeared into night.
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
universal to women, educational to men
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
universal to women, educational to men
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
universal to women, educational to men
A Women's Desire, by Naomi Buote 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 42 reviews.
Wallace LaBenne More than 1 year ago
Great
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Thank you ....I'm drinking fresh brewed coffee right now, want some? Mine is hazel nut...hmm
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Helema Jones More than 1 year ago
Your right on the money with this........every man who don't get it need to read your poem........I LOVE IT!!! Thank you for sharing
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Wow. thanks can
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Ashwani Roy More than 1 year ago
Wonderful poetry! Take more stars from me ******************************************** It is really a great poem, I love that!
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Stacy Gardner More than 1 year ago
Beautiful!!!
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Thanks, I`m looking forward to reading more of your poems
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Tejinder Singh More than 1 year ago
very nice
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
thank you Mr Singh, I have read some great poems from you as well!
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Rebecca Confer More than 1 year ago
Very nice! Your description of a woman's desire is spot on. I believe we've all felt this before & can relate to what you're saying. 
Divya Nishant Ranote More than 1 year ago
wonderful poem.............right from core
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
You are a brilliant writer this means a lot coming from you.
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Hugh Tague More than 1 year ago
Very well wrote!!! This work is Fantastic, bard-like and classically perfect. WELL DONE NAOMI ! If you get a chance I would value your opinion on one I just wrote, Thank you and Keep up the great work. http://www.poetry.com/poems/593821-The-Passion-Of-Camelot
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
I can't find your poem can you comment on it so I can see it and click? I would really like to read it.
tony right More than 1 year ago
a masterful write which is also helpful...thank you for sharing
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Darlene Dai'Re More than 1 year ago
great
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Gabriella Ott More than 1 year ago
Thsi was a wonderful poem! I loved it. Just simply beautiful. I could see it in my mind. You've inspired me as a writer. I hope to someday write as beautiful as this:)
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
thanks, looking forward to reading you!
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
The Pinocchiø Poet More than 1 year ago
Very nicely penned and very deep, good poem!
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Thanks it took a lot of work.
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
sara irizarry More than 1 year ago
universal to all women
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
thanks, looking forward to reading you!
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Fine
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Bambi Vasquez More than 1 year ago
Really beautiful poem!
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Thanks
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
john palumbo More than 1 year ago
very godo love this can u please explaine how u get so many views and how to make friends and all please also im not very good with words i just express what i know i didn't do so well in english and spellings so i do'nt know these big words u are using so much would love if u could help me a lil email ironchef388@gmail.com
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Write from the heart. write what really matters to you. Write as if you are reading it out loud...put a comma where you take a pause...etc. a poem takes a lot of work. Sometimes, I work on a poem for days to get the right words and feeling. I use sometimes the Rhyme zone rhyming dictionary website to help me find the exact words I need. (rhymes or synonyms)...Hope this helps ;) Naomi
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
randam person More than 1 year ago
really lovely
Zachary randle More than 1 year ago
love is a journey
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
A beautiful torturous one
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Ayubkhan U More than 1 year ago
very nice
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Mathilde Dumas More than 1 year ago
So superb poetry... bravo Naomi!
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Thanks looking forward to exploring your work
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Therese Bacha More than 1 year ago
This is life.........Terry
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Sure is!
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Roland Roli More than 1 year ago
fits the bill
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Sheri Moroe More than 1 year ago
passionate, well written, great images, I can see it playing out in my mind, That heated kiss that flares into more. : ) Well done!
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Thanks, I`m looking forward to reading more of your poems
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
thanks, looking forward to reading you!
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
chico ray More than 1 year ago
you've taught me some things
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Be bold in showing your affection. We can't guess.
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Wes Sturdevant More than 1 year ago
Love the feelings being expressed and great rhyme.
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Thanks took a lot of work.
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
Regina Leveringston More than 1 year ago
at times we can feel like that and it was portrayed beautifully in this poem
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Just telling it like it is!
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Nice Comment
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