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Our Children

The minute you have children, 
You`ve lived life before them,
And live life now with them,
but never do you live life after them.
For they are always there,
In your heart, on your mind,
Always with you, present in time.

~:)

And the present tense, you live even more, 
When they get their driver`s license and don`t own a car!









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Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Short fun read
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
http://poetry.com/poems/590792-Our-Children#
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Oh, sweet children of mine~:)
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
Ah children another of life`s complications, but we love them
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
A short read ...with true ending
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
The minute you have children, You have lived life before them, And live life now, with them but never do you live life after them.
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
A short read
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
The minute you have children, You`ve lived life before them, And live life now with them, but never do you live life after them.
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
In your heart, on your mind, Even though they are far, They are with you always , Inside you, present in time.
Naomi Buote More than 1 year ago
The minute you have children, You`ve lived life before them, And live life now with them, but never do you live life after them.
Our Children, by Naomi Buote 4.2 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 14 reviews.
Lawrence Cerrato More than 1 year ago
For a poem of 7 lines, you used that style very efficiently and expressively! Beautiful Meaning! Thank You For Sharing!
Saraswathi Vicky 12 months ago
reality 
Helema Jones More than 1 year ago
Thank you for sharing
Sarah Rose Hall More than 1 year ago
Oh boy, what a poem. Nice.
 
Rishika RAGHUNANDANAN 7 months ago
Ritesh Singh 10 days ago
I love it
Glenn Dickerson 27 days ago
Perfect
Ashley Bennett 10 days ago
I enjoyed reading this.  Thank you for sharing. 
P.s. so true...
Stella W More than 1 year ago
enjoyed the read--  Thanks for sharing your work
Gabriella Ott More than 1 year ago
Great poem enjoyed reading it. I liked the meaning of your poem:) Hope to see more!!
Coy Day 7 months ago
good
Jennifer Candelaria 11 months ago
Twas Peace
Beth Starr 9 months ago
like
Sy Wong 12 months ago
A good subject for poems..I like it.There's is more to write about I guess. 
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