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Phoenix Reborn

the fourth installment of the series including poems
1. http://www.poetry.com/poems/577700-Unearthly-
2. http://www.poetry.com/poems/584898-Her-Maimed-Soul
3. http://www.poetry.com/poems/593882-The-Refugee



They slayed another spirit pure,
Her strength evoked their hate.
In state of madness mind’s obscure
And leads straight to Gehenna’s gate.
 
Sick of the cruelty that spread,
The Maker saw the mortal sin,
Saved pristine soul of the dead.
One human heart then let it in.
 
It was the refugee, her soul –
Undying matter dwelt inside.
After her life the bullet stole,
That gentle substance took to flight.
 
It chose a female human being
And slipped into her tainted heart.
The tenderness she’s been concealing,
Had crushed it to a million shards.
 
The soul revived her inner beauty,
Erased the thoughts of wicked ways.
Each body’s part was crying mutely
Feeling unearthly girl’s embrace.
 
Like phoenix she has been reborn
In human body yet stayed pure.
But doomed to suffer being lorn.
The loss of love God cannot cure.
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Poetry.com 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 11 reviews.
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
FINE
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Farida Amin More than 1 year ago
Well crafted, amazing, creative, enjoyed reading it
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you a lot, Farida)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Very Powerful poem here! Well done.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thank you, Jon)
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Tracy Bollinger More than 1 year ago
Worthy of sequel. Stay on it!
Nick Tamborra More than 1 year ago
Den I am speechless, this epic series that you have been writing is by far the most enchanting brilliant work of art that I have ever read, the last stanza alone I am still in awe with. I am with baited breath waiting for your next installment.
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
omg, thank you so much, Nick) i'm beyond flattered, you can't even imagine what power your pleasant words have and how much important for me to read such review from a native speaker
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
ARUN MAZUMDER 12 months ago
well done....pl.review my poems
Deiner Tindall More than 1 year ago
good, buts really emotional
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thanks
Victorious Robinson More than 1 year ago
Wow Check out some of mine
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thanks
Anna Laurencio More than 1 year ago
ok
Amani Mersni More than 1 year ago
nice
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thanks
Cynthia Armstrong More than 1 year ago
good
Den Khaustov More than 1 year ago
thanks
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