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When the sky

When the sky
Gets darker.
I will come to you
Dressed in regret.
While my heart
Reeks of misery.
With dreams shattered
By the fists of reality.
Tormented by thoughts
Of possible futures.
In the darkness
When all has fled.
I will lay my head on
My father’s shoulders.
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Poetry.com 3.9 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 15 reviews.
Frances Lamm More than 1 year ago
Very nice poem and very touching
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
fine
deti deti More than 1 year ago
Very beautiful 
Stacy Lauzon-Rocha More than 1 year ago
Love it!
Stella W More than 1 year ago
well done-- thank you for sharing
Zachary randle More than 1 year ago
this is pretty good
Aadee Watson More than 1 year ago
best i read tonight thanks
Bonzell Joins, Jr. 4 months ago
Good imagery
Mohan Pillai 9 months ago
Emotional 
ROBERT SORLEY More than 1 year ago
liked it
Alan Green 'Guppyman' More than 1 year ago
the poet tells of their love of thier chosen faith
Savannah McNeil-Thedorff More than 1 year ago
good emoitons.
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
Personalize less
SarahandJohnluke Fury More than 1 year ago
intersting i enjoy it
Domic Sands More than 1 year ago
nice climatization ofwords
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