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I don't feel

I don’t feel
Time spinning,
Wind marching,
Clouds crying,
I can feel.
My heart dying,
Life flying,
Souls parting
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Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 20 reviews.
amber talwar 11 months ago

In such few words the poet describes her state of mind. She's so drawn in herself that external changes go unnoticed.

it's beautiful.

Ziad Sarraf More than 1 year ago
nice work
Stella W More than 1 year ago
Nice job--  thanks for the share
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
fine
Lawrence Tesoro 11 months ago
Excellent
Cece Sparkle More than 1 year ago
Beautiful work :')
Sarah Rose Hall More than 1 year ago
Interesting 
Sammer Ghouleh More than 1 year ago
Good 
Anna Laurencio More than 1 year ago
sera fait, merci pour le partag will done, thanks for sharing"
David Justin Abraham More than 1 year ago
words are strong...negative words are stronger
Jason Weiss More than 1 year ago
leaves one hanging on for more...
Ritesh Singh More than 1 year ago
nice work 
Farrukh Azam More than 1 year ago
Poem seems to be Rational and expresses realities of life.
CLINT More than 1 year ago
Enjoyed it
Bonzell Joins, Jr. 4 months ago
Simple and sweet.  Keep sharing
Amaris Mangual More than 1 year ago
feelings...can be complex
Stephanie McAfee More than 1 year ago
good job
Darlene Dai'Re More than 1 year ago
ok
Brandy Pryor More than 1 year ago
good job
Michael Greco More than 1 year ago
yep
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