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I don't feel

I don’t feel
Time spinning,
Wind marching,
Clouds crying,
I can feel.
My heart dying,
Life flying,
Souls parting
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Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 19 reviews.
Cece Sparkle More than 1 year ago
Beautiful work :')
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
fine
Ziad Sarraf More than 1 year ago
nice work
Stella W More than 1 year ago
Nice job--  thanks for the share
Lawrence Tesoro 7 months ago
Excellent
amber talwar 7 months ago

In such few words the poet describes her state of mind. She's so drawn in herself that external changes go unnoticed.

it's beautiful.

Sarah Rose Hall More than 1 year ago
Interesting 
Anna Laurencio More than 1 year ago
sera fait, merci pour le partag will done, thanks for sharing"
David Justin Abraham More than 1 year ago
words are strong...negative words are stronger
Jason Weiss More than 1 year ago
leaves one hanging on for more...
Farrukh Azam More than 1 year ago
Poem seems to be Rational and expresses realities of life.
Ritesh Singh More than 1 year ago
nice work 
Sammer Ghouleh More than 1 year ago
Good 
CLINT 12 months ago
Enjoyed it
Amaris Mangual More than 1 year ago
feelings...can be complex
Stephanie McAfee More than 1 year ago
good job
Darlene Dai'Re More than 1 year ago
ok
Brandy Pryor More than 1 year ago
good job
Michael Greco More than 1 year ago
yep
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