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Thanks for the novel Valery Alalykin

Thanks for the novel
Painfully I waited for you at the sea.
The evening breeze is breathed sadly from a land.
You have so and not come this time.
And I all am trusted in related souls.
All the summer long my soul groan was lasted.
Your image in the remember did not thaw.
I went on the coast, as on the platform,
And waited for you a day by day in the tearments.
But here "the deity" charm has disappeared.
In a soul the fire of a hopes hasty has ashed away.
Not to revive already the died words,
But not to forget the gentle touches .
What for the deceit was necessary to you?
The happiness fragile is rolled in the past by a wave.
And nevertheless thanks for the novel, -
It is pleasant to drink all grief up to the bottom.
9.04.2011



 
 



Спасибо за роман

Мучительно я ждал у моря Вас.
Вечерний бриз дышал печально с суши.
Вы так и не пришли на этот раз.
А я всё верил в родственные души.
Всё лето длился мой душевный стон.
Не таял образ Ваш в воспоминаньях.
Я шёл на берег, будто на перрон,
И ждал Вас каждый день в терзаньях.
Но вот исчезла прелесть "божества".
В душе угас костёр надежд поспешных.
Не воскресить уже умершие слова,
Но не забыть прикосновений нежных.
Зачем Вам нужен был обман?
Обломок счастья катит в прошлое волна.
И всё-таки спасибо за роман, -
Приятно всю печаль испить до дна.
9.04.2011




 
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Donna Dissauer Saliba More than 1 year ago
The literal translation probably got lost in the language translation, but I think your poem is beautiful. The subject matter is very emotional.
Nancy Halbert More than 1 year ago
When someone let's you down or abruptly leaves your life in imagery.  Thought it was great even tho translated from another language
Yudi Shah More than 1 year ago
very nyc
S. Subhashini More than 1 year ago
Lovely one
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Saraswathi Vicky More than 1 year ago
nice
joseline ndaday More than 1 year ago

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R DuCree More than 1 year ago
Great poem 
Hassen Gara More than 1 year ago
Good .Please review my poem http://poetry.com/poems/1692414-DREAMS-AND-NIGHTMARES.Thanks
Diane Burnett 11 months ago
So moving Great Work !!!!
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Mic Cinani More than 1 year ago
Oyes
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
NICE SHARING,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Janice Brown More than 1 year ago
The future holds 
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A -Thiest More than 1 year ago
when written by a poet
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Nadia Reinhorn More than 1 year ago
the bottom is in russian!
joseline ndaday More than 1 year ago

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N_eem More than 1 year ago
Can relate to the strong emotions, very touchy
Jessica Leupitz More than 1 year ago
Very nice
Foehn Wind More than 1 year ago
Interesting poem.
Coy Day More than 1 year ago
nice
CLINT 11 months ago
Really enjoyed it
sharon Talty More than 1 year ago
The person was grateful for
A novel.
Joyce Nicholson More than 1 year ago
good poem
shonda walker More than 1 year ago
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