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Formulating plans

Bubbling troubling thoughts
covering corpse ideas
sent to sanctuaries where graves lay

Easily the wind drifts this mind

Climb aboard and float away!

A photographic memory
taking pictures depicted in
this mans eyes
fantasizing a dream
in which we shall all come true

A gem to spend hours
formulating pearls to
unfold and form through brain storm
known to create creativity

Thee electricity
to write words in time
ten thousands volts
traveling through my spine
to find hands that moves this pen
to end the sands from sinking away

Thinking if we stay stained in ink
we shall all be immortal forever
whenever anyone reads us
bleeding blood stained poetry
to know it's we
on this piece of paper
evaporated in the ways that we think


In one blink to think

We're gone!

Even though our souls live on

Born from every word drawn from eyes

Realizing we will always be alive
even after we die

To all artist

We shall eternally exist...
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Poetry.com 4.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 15 reviews.
Dustin Tuttle More than 1 year ago
Very nice!! A poets passion is unlike any other
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
mercedes More than 1 year ago
I love this
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Blake Grantham More than 1 year ago
I haven't been on the sight long but I'm convinced there are jealous poets out there.  You are being reviewed by people who can't hold a candle to your talent!!  There's no reason you should have less than five stars on this poem.  This sight reminds me of yelp!!!
Holly Szurczynski More than 1 year ago
Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi More than 1 year ago
interesting poetry with an insightful message
Alan Green 'Guppyman' More than 1 year ago
the poet tells of a soul who is true to who they
Pattabiraman Raghuraman More than 1 year ago
Somebody who really wants to leave a mark as a poet
Chris Misdary More than 1 year ago
nice reading.... with a good contrast
Juan Lucero More than 1 year ago
Good poem describing a poet's path on creating poetry.
Ronald Kidd More than 1 year ago
a little long
Junaid Khan 3 months ago
Betty Smith Collins 6 months ago
A little scattered about.... can see the intensity of it, but could be a bit more refined.  Great content... well said.
Jennine Dimas More than 1 year ago
overall very good
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