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Wings Of Limitation

 
As high as birds fly

The sky in my mind climbs

No clouds

No crying

No time to lose

This heart the color red and blue
when renewed

The colorful features
of these emotions

As high as birds fly

I see all the possibilities

As high as birds fly

I steer these invisible wings

Wishing on reaching as high

The sentimental sighs
of a bird in song
longing to be free

and in this way
I escape the realities of
being grounded

As high as birds fly

When given my all

I to can soar...
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Kathy Hall 4 months ago
I wrote this in honor of all who served n Vietnam.
Ann Rowlinson More than 1 year ago
I love it.  
Cice Rivera More than 1 year ago
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I shared on twitter!
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Cameron Hathaway More than 1 year ago
Glad you have found your wings
Leslie Gonzales More than 1 year ago
Creative thoughts
Rebecca Lyle More than 1 year ago
 loved it
Mike _ More than 1 year ago
Just awesome
Jody Degi More than 1 year ago
I loved your poem! I love your style! Very positive and inspiring words!
chassie richardson 11 months ago
this poem is amazing man keep up the good work
Michael Speziale 12 months ago
Very creative 
I enjoyed it.
Keep on writing!
Robert Rosenthal 9 months ago
I truly like the way this work soars in my mind.
The allegorical references are full of emotional pictures.
The meter flows with the images.
Thank you 
Suzanne Wells Villafuentes 9 months ago
Awesome!
sonia crt 9 months ago
very nice
Rubein Geterminah 10 months ago
At times we wish to develop wings like birds and fly but we can't.
All we can do is take the wind of inspiration, then we see no limitations.
Elizabeth Craze 10 months ago
This is amazing.
Ronald Duffie 10 months ago
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was very inspiring. Thank you so much for sharing.
Rakhi Tiwari 5 months ago
Nice one
Elizabeth C 4 months ago
A hopeful message! My favourite part is:
""As high as birds fly

I see all the possibilities""
Tanaia Wilkinson More than 1 year ago
This is a great poem! Beautiful imagery, great message, smooth flow. It's 99% perfect.
It would be 100% if only you had spelled "too" right at the end. But that's not a big deal.
5 stars in my book.
Suzanna Sladojevic 7 months ago
I love the topic and your use of metaphors.
Joyce Nicholson More than 1 year ago
flow just right
mercedes More than 1 year ago
give it your all
Galina Valkova More than 1 year ago
TRUE AND so  ( I come from a place of love )-"Slap-Slam-Trump" , please review the poem and the rest of my work and please spread the word
Amit Rahman More than 1 year ago
i too can soar
Janice Brown More than 1 year ago
Feeling free.
Lilly Emery More than 1 year ago
:)
Azizul Maqsud More than 1 year ago
Great job.
Beth Sneed Phillips More than 1 year ago
I feel your need. Great expression.
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