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Life Ablaze

 
Life, a spark, is the birth
Breath of earth, deep in dirt
Blown desert, weeping sand
No man’s land, flame shall burn
Grow, love, learn, and embark
 
Life, a flame, withstand age
Born the sage, wise of mind
Heart aligned, beating strong
Hear it’s song, fire burst
Soul immersed, without aim
 
Life, does flash, within time
Does past mime, recreate
Bound to fate, clinging air
Unaware, death appears
New frontiers flies the ash
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Poetry.com 4.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 14 reviews.
Nicholas Goffredo More than 1 year ago
Loved your description of each phase of life. Breath of dirt, deep in dirt. Clever poetry.
Eric Davis More than 1 year ago
I really enjoyed
Diana Sitnic More than 1 year ago
bravo wow
Tanaia Wilkinson More than 1 year ago
This is exactly the type of poetry that I like to read. It flows very smoothly, and the rhymes add to the message without overpowering it or seeming contrived. This is lovely.
Muhammad Khalid Khan More than 1 year ago
Good
Lou Thomas More than 1 year ago
Significantly terminal yet evading the cascades of time
Witchy Currier 9 months ago
very well put, love your writing
Angel Jones 8 months ago
This speaks of a Phoenix rising from the ashes. It brings hope into granules of time. Well written.
Lawrence Tesoro 29 days ago
There is life in literature, as in your poem Life Ablaze! Amazing!!!
Colin Davies More than 1 year ago
Thanks for posting this. I like the imagery very much!
Sri Nagastram More than 1 year ago
i like this...
Patty Casillas More than 1 year ago
Definitely powerful imagery. Love it
Michelle Dwyer Ortz More than 1 year ago
like how it progresses from beginning to end.
Dayonta Graham More than 1 year ago
Artistically to the point. Beautifully written hun. You have a new fan.
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