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My Thoughts about Thieves

He walked in here like he owned the place,
Picked up my words . . . and read them.
He didn't care that they were private,
or unfinished.
Didn't he know that he was stealing . . .
from my mind?
I never said he could share . . . my thoughts.
Sometimes no one is allowed to share my words
They come from inside me
They are a part of me . . . my soul.
I don't need the frustrations,
Of fearing that he's in my head . . .
Stealing my thoughts.
They can't be replaced.
Someone stole my money once . . .
\But I got some more.
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Poetry.com 4.2 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 27 reviews.
Amber Whitehead More than 1 year ago
Great
mylce bon More than 1 year ago
i like it
B Wright 3 months ago
rebuild your happy thoughts
Andreas Simic 8 days ago
Thank goodness there is pretty much more of everything. Enjoyed the theme.
Sonja Carnes 24 days ago
Excellent work here! Awesome!
Peter Boydell 13 days ago
don't sweat it
Yam-tin Martin Wong 7 months ago
Money stolen can be earned back again, but not for your thoughts. Stand up for your right, Donald!
Walt Sisikin More than 1 year ago
Excellent poem.  Very well written.  I liked it very much.
Nicole Lejeune Flores More than 1 year ago
You can always get more money but your thoughts are yours ; )
Talia Thorne More than 1 year ago
Love the style. I enjoyed the way you put to words the sacredness of thought.
Celumusa Macwele More than 1 year ago
you can earn as much as you can no limitation
Dips Lawati 10 months ago
genious
Shannon Beaudette More than 1 year ago
nice piece
kathy k More than 1 year ago
Love the persona.
Patricia Day 4 days ago
good .  Makes me feel your frustration
Earl Lee 28 days ago
i too once had my words stolen, it's very personal, ones words and thoughts. such things should be respected and enjoyed.
Mohan Pillai 14 days ago
Thou shall not ponder over it. All have three pound brains 
Angela Dillard 7 months ago
I really enjoyed it the way you wrote the emotions so that the reader could feel them, as if our thoughts were being stolen. GREAT
Rendi Ames 4 months ago
Well written, the  thoughts belong to the thinker. 
Dajenae Zuber 27 days ago
Makes me think.... :/
Nishank Mehta More than 1 year ago
Didn't quite get the last bit
Sarah Danielle Roe More than 1 year ago
Ok
Randy Markell More than 1 year ago
I enjoyed it, but it could use just a touch revision.
Coy Day More than 1 year ago
THe poem is good , Need to put moor Heart , moor expression ,more passion on the true lose
Lily Lily More than 1 year ago
well explained
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