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His Masterpiece

This can't be emulated it can't be imitated, the emotion his soul weaved into the words that his hand put down resonate through the air with the purest of sounds. I know you hate to listen to the truth but it's embedded into the lines of his writing so there's no use in your lying. His message is clear, he didn't put it in disguise, and he didn't try to hide it from ignorant eyes. With the words that he wrote he defied the impossible, this is art at its finest you can't deny this, this is his masterpiece.
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Kyle Whitt More than 1 year ago
Written to be fun and loose, nothing more and nothing less
Poetry.com 3.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 26 reviews.
Kayla R More than 1 year ago
I thought it nice reading, A poem to read over a cup of tea.
Shefi T More than 1 year ago
I am fairly new here, joined today and so I am not very good at it, it would be great to converse and add more friends, but how??? On to your Poetry... Oh my god, it was stunning, words rubbing on my face and pulling me along with the verse showing me everything of it and the essence truly mesmerizing me, wow!!! I love this, really a great write and an awesome opportunity to read and review it :)
Chanel Galaza More than 1 year ago
I wanted more to read :)
Kizzy Sherman More than 1 year ago
You've penned words of great poetic expression will brillance . please keep giving us your awesome thoughts and feelings.☺
Regina D.M Karluah More than 1 year ago
As I read on I wanting it to continue but when I hit the last line I knew it must stop. -RDMK
Alexi Quinones More than 1 year ago
U have a fantastic way with words. Your word imagery is truly special.. I truly want 2 b your friend, I know that I can learn a lot from u. Compared 2 u, my poetry would b considered novice (rookish). !
Kyle Whitt More than 1 year ago
Thank you for your kind words they mean a lot to me. To be honest this poem is self serving and written at a time when I was feeling a little arrogant after I had written two other poems, Enlightenment and The voice of madness. So to answer you question, no I was not speaking of God, just allowing a moment of arrogance to be written down.
Maira Javaid More than 1 year ago
well written
John Johnson More than 1 year ago
your use of words really paint a great scene.
Majid Moarefvand More than 1 year ago
very well done
Ricky Shepherd More than 1 year ago
Nice job, well worded with a good flow. Definitely enjoyed reading this.
vernia stutman More than 1 year ago
The ability to tap the source of truth is in all even though many fail to recognize it nor to mention their inability to put pen to paper as you have demonstrated ...
Atanu Mukherji More than 1 year ago
Kyle, this is very well written indeed. I would have loved it more had you given this piece a poetic format. Maybe you could consider putting in stanzas suitable. Keep up the good work. May I request and invite you to look up and review some of my poems: http://www.poetry.com/users/299958-Atanu%20Mukherji
Swapnil Choure More than 1 year ago
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MALLIKA GANGAKHEDKAR More than 1 year ago
Truth is what it is. The plain truth, which goes to the heart.
Kavana Gowda More than 1 year ago
it also says about owns work.........may be your poetry too
Larry Stallings More than 1 year ago
good
alan wells More than 1 year ago
good
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
as a poor reader'i too find it too difficult its content yet i salute
Demetrius Ryder More than 1 year ago
Not bad. Keep up good works
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
well tried
E Matlock More than 1 year ago
Not quite a masterpiece. Definitely keep up the good work sir.
Avanessa Rose More than 1 year ago
This poem had a strong start, but I didn't find the emotion, sound, lie, or message in it.
Randy Markell More than 1 year ago
Definitely needs work, but keep writing.
Taiface L More than 1 year ago
I love how you meshed these words with patterns that feel like a rap song. There is no doubt you are talented.Was there another part to this?
Rajnish Mishra 3 days ago
prose poetry.
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