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On becoming Mother

Happiest moment sweet heart sounds
Ideal sonorous notes urging your womb
Your big hips cheers stout breast
Touch of a new born the real test
 
You become the person of inspiration
Blessed we feel  with latest creation
Realizing the how vast world thrive
God dwells in heart to bless us survive
 
Book of life not hiding behind anything
Reality of your soul is the greatest key
Alive to express your vital generation
Precise compact moment for evolution
 
Loving sonata smear the taste of joy
Cherish your touch, lips,hug and joy,
 
~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~~~
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Stella Vkn More than 1 year ago
Happiest moment sweet heart sounds.... I could review your work all day... love your poetic work
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
love
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Happiest moment sweet heart sounds Ideal sonorous notes urging your womb
Saroj Gupta More than 1 year ago
I love it
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
thank u very much
On becoming Mother, by Jawahar Gupta 4.9 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 20 reviews.
Stella Vkn More than 1 year ago
superb work
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
welcome
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
so beautiful
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
LOVE
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Happiest moment sweet heart sounds Ideal sonorous notes urging your womb
Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi More than 1 year ago
well done.... great work
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Thank u Dinobi to love the poem
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Your inspiring words help me to become a better human being and good poet, thanks lot ,my friend LOVE,
Mr. 8 Ball More than 1 year ago
The joys of becoming a mom have been expressed PERFECTLY! No more words can describe how thought out this was. The majesty is beyond me and the creativity was and is visibly here
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Thankk u very much...
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Happiest moment sweet heart sounds Ideal sonorous notes urging your womb
Prithbish Das More than 1 year ago
Lot to learn from you!
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
LOVE
Wellington Marshall More than 1 year ago
another great poem. there is no love stronger than a mother's love. good write
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
tHANK U VERY MUCH Wellington to love the poem, Deep gratitude for an excellent review,
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
i appreciate your love
madelin More than 1 year ago
tender love that never fades
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Thank u Madelin for your wise words Infinite Gratitude, Namaste!
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
yes dear
Saroj Gupta More than 1 year ago
a beautiful description of being becoming new mother,
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
LOVE
Saroj Gupta More than 1 year ago
thank u
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Happiest moment sweet heart sounds Ideal sonorous notes urging your womb
Saroj Gupta More than 1 year ago
I appreciate your poem
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
Let Ma Durga Bless You All.
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
same to you
Isabelle Jones More than 1 year ago
Absolutely beautiful.
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
thank u very much
Amiadra Arrington More than 1 year ago
Beautiful
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Thank you
Amiadra Arrington More than 1 year ago
JG u keep me going strong on writing poetry and I like to rate all your poems.
Amiadra Arrington More than 1 year ago
U are welcome JG
Saraswathi Bhattaram 9 months ago
Live action but hidden,only to be felt and appreciated the sweet sickening kicks of the babe in the womb surpass all other recreations of this life
Jawahar Gupta 8 months ago
than u very much
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
No Evolution,No New Generation, But For Mothers,The Life ends,
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
i rewrote the poem joy of becoming the mother
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
i revised the poem. thank you
Jessi Reynolds More than 1 year ago
absolutely beautiful
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
THANK U VERY MUCH
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Happiest moment sweet heart sounds Ideal sonorous notes urging your womb
Andreas Derksen More than 1 year ago
what a joy
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Thank you
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
yes
Sammer Ghouleh More than 1 year ago
very touchy
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Thank u dear Sammer for your wise ords, Infinite Gratitude! Namaste!
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
o k
Audrey Chambers More than 1 year ago
Great poem! I like how you write "big hips" :-) It very cheerful I enjoyed it very much!
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Your inspiring words help me to become a better human being and good poet, thanks lot ,my friend LOVE,
Jillian Day More than 1 year ago
Speechless, I LOVED IT
Jillian Day More than 1 year ago
Wonderful poem really, here's another poem that I wrote.
http://poetry.com/poems/1598737-The-Old-Creek
John May More than 1 year ago
Well done.
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Thank you
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
thanks again..
Joiesbin Nishanth More than 1 year ago
Cute words, well expressed!
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Thank u Nishanth Deep Gratitude!
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
thanks again love,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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