Solider
by
Sara Stevens
Known nation stumbled quietly
Forceful where the people riot
Voices say free us please
Carry on the evening breeze
Known to none but mother’s weep
For their call for peace not war
But still serve in soldier’s place
All hope for a brighter future
For many have now to know
Their blood was spilled for freedom now
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Poetry.com 3 out of 5 based on 2 votes.
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Some of the sentances just don't work well. but I love the concept. I love the thoughts and feelings
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this is okay if parts are going to rhyme the whole poem should rhyme....it would flow a lot better
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