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Known nation stumbled quietly
Forceful where the people riot
Voices say free us please
Carry on the evening breeze
Known to none but mother’s weep
For their call for peace not war
But still serve in soldier’s place
All hope for a brighter future
For many have now to know
Their blood was spilled for freedom now


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Poetry.com 3.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 3 reviews.
Gloria Dantigua More than 1 year ago
I understand what you mean I invite you read my poem ; http://poetry.com/poems/1295527-Society-
Kyla Gray More than 1 year ago
Some of the sentances just don't work well. but I love the concept. I love the thoughts and feelings
Chenika Thornton-Legardye More than 1 year ago
This poem wasn't written for sentence structure. It was written because of the message.
Nicole Parslow More than 1 year ago
this is okay if parts are going to rhyme the whole poem should rhyme....it would flow a lot better
Chenika Thornton-Legardye More than 1 year ago
Not all poems have to rhyme. Sure there are parts that do and some that don't. My question to you is didyou get the essence of the message?
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