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Careless

I feel for you,
When you told me.
Noone cares.
I feel your emotions,
So real, that you care.
You wish you can change things.
Sustain, yourself from opening
With saddness.
Your heart isn't pointless it beats.
Someone must care, and repeats.
Why be so hard on yourself and take it to heart?
Everything will fall into place,
Don't let it fall apart.
 
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Staci Enzenbacher More than 1 year ago
I enjoy reading it
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reading! :D
Joyce Carol Gibson More than 1 year ago
positive and powerful
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reading Joyce! :D
George Collett More than 1 year ago
This verse makes one thing! Well penned my friend!
George Collett More than 1 year ago
If you have time please review http://poetry.com/poems/561679-Stoned-Nonsense
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Getting strength when you feel people don't care for you!
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
thanks again
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
very nice
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much Gabriel!
Joey Jones More than 1 year ago
Well done Sir. This couplet was so well penned! Why be so hard on yourself and take it to heart? Everything will fall into place, Don't let it fall apart. Awesome Jon!
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much Joey! :D
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
love it , great expression of deepest thought
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you Clifton! :)
Tejinder Singh More than 1 year ago
nice work
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much! :)
Dave Ratcliffe More than 1 year ago
Loved this one, such a great message...very supportive and delivered with compassion
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thanks Dave
Mathilde Dumas More than 1 year ago
With a great positive message. Well done.
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much! :)
Ang Notti More than 1 year ago
I feel like I know you just from your poetry, I know I've said that before, but its true.
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Well I do try to express myself as much as possible in my poems! :D
Shaunta Foster More than 1 year ago
i like the feeling of hope this has
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you! :D
Khalil Goddard More than 1 year ago
Well expressed.
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much
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