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At the Yonder Blue.

Skin deep is not that beauty;
Deeper than the ocean;
Farther than the sky;
Within the mind's eye;
Swimming in the realms within;
Slippery as a fish;
Expansive more than a whale;
Smaller than a plankton;
Elusive to grasp;
Forever for me,
It might remain
an Enigma;
A fascinating being
to observe, learn and wonder,
The prized asset of
any gifted poet at spawning
tales of wonder
at the blue yonder. 
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Poetry.com 3.5 out of 5 based on 4 votes.
Dema Al-Obaidy More than 1 year ago
Creativity, imagination, knowledge, environment along with nature and life experiences all collaborate to create a poet if mixed with talent...really great poem...well done
Hari More than 1 year ago
Dema, This is a tribute to the poets' commune. A punctured heart flows blood and the injury is healed with a caress from caring hearts which spawns out honey and milk poetically. This realm of poets, is what I wanted to highlight. Your understanding is very much appreciated. Thanks for your rating and review.
Gunjot Luthra More than 1 year ago
nice
Hari More than 1 year ago
Thanks, Gunjot for your review and rating.
Chris Misdary More than 1 year ago
nice subject
Christopher Scott Galvin More than 1 year ago
If it is about beauty the author needs a better ending.
Hari More than 1 year ago
Thank you, Christopher, for your review. It's a praise about the creativity of any poet. Please note the last four lines that should be the pointers. Thanks, however, for your effort.
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