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please let give me any feedbacks on my mistakes, i dont have many years writing poetry but i do love to write creative image in a beautiful way. as many people are aware i have gramatical problems therefore with you help if you will i hope to get better.
She is worth more than treasure
Her beauty cannot be measured
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How can I be in the present, When it was you,
The present that I had?
You were the one that kept me on a frozen state
Whom made me treasure every moments with all of it´s taste
I remember it was a blessing beyond fate
I never had to remember anything
Because the present made me have everything
I never remembered being sad
Because today you made me glad
I never remember anything good
Because every day I had you
But now that you are gone, I get you in my dreams
The only cure I have is to walk on memories
I am unstable right now, like the hit of a foul
Wondering where can you be found
I don’t want a treasured memory
So I could just walk on fantasy
But instead I want you to marry me
So we can live for eternity
On past, present, or future
I don’t wanna go back on what I looked for
Never remember nothing
Because at least I have something
And that is
(You)
I am a coin and you're it´s measure
I am a Christian and you're the God
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Stop the spectacular moments of the tones
And fast foward to the best part of the song
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Take every single reason why I become who I am
Take everything until there is no more
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At the same time it is one of the hardest things to find?
Something that is harder than finding a hidden treasure
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While you are a soldier and your friends are your comrades.
Even though no one teaches you how to survive or how to become strong
That is something that the battle field was made for.
Hold on strong and keep your comrades alive
For at the end of the war they might be the only ones you might have.
Don’t be sacred if you bleed neither suffocate yourself in pain
Remember it is a road that every one of us must take.
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The reason why I write this message is because I want to let you know that right now I wish I could write the best poetry in the world to someone who is more special than the poetry itself and more important than the world. Someone who is worth fighting the ocean tides, and give away everything I have. Someone who is worth giving my soul but not my heart because I want her to reach the deepest part of my life, someone who is worth giving my thoughts and feelings because I know you will always hear me.
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so when the day comes, it will be absolutely amazing.
I will only ask her one simple request
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with unusual events which I cannot explain
like the stars appearing at the middle of the day
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