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Your eyes

When.I look at your eyes,
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There will be.no trace of us -
everything is vanishing
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God take individually eveyone's care
(Revised/corrected)

by Mrinmoy Choudhury

God take individually everyone's care 
even though he has uncountable children of his innumberable worlds eternally he creates by His manifestation.

He has also given us
all the intelligence and wisdom - 
all the strength and vigour 
to exercise by ourselves
to nurture and take our own care. 

We ought not curse God 
and cry for our fallen luck 
when we fail to face in life 
all the harsh.or arduous task. 

We sleep and wake up - 
wake up and again sleep 
but Godfather, the Creator of the Universe
cannot sleep - take a nap or wink - 
He only keep awake 
lest all the Universal system 
should go out of order and crumbled
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23.12.2016

Note :-
This is the revised/corrected version
of my poem, 'God cannot take ........ "
published on 01.06.2015

Because God is pervaded all where and
there is nothing is beyond His reach. He
always take care of us.

So, my earlier poem required correction
and I revised and corrected it.

I will be highly grateful and encouaged
if you, Sir now, find it is OK please.

Many many thanks www.poetry.com for
for the valuable advice and guidence
please.

Inconvenience caused is highly regretted
please.
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Lord Srikrishna says :-

"The atoms of the universe
may be counted, but not so my
manifestations : for eternally I
create innumberable worlds."

- Srimad Bhagavattam,
III.2.XI.10
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Tale of a Rickshaw puller

by Mrinmoy Choudhury
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              Men live in the house -
          Animals live in the habitat.
              Men sleep on the bed -
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Dilemma

You are ready for dinner -
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.REAL.LOVE

Love between the two
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Nature's plan for us
is very slow and steady -
it is not in a hurry
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She is selfless mother in herself 

It's mother who bears us, 
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My heart turned to be a desert
Without any love,
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