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Relentless

To be yielded and yet disobey is hypocritical, but yet typical from the imperfect to the perfect
And I am coming to you, because only you know
How did I allow things to get so out of hand? Knowing that you are mine forever
So I am coming to you, to see if you still feel the same
Well.... Do you?
Or must I be the stereotypical that's looking for the typical in you
  And for you I may stay
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Poetry.com 3.8 out of 5 based on 5 votes.
Rupurt Riviera More than 1 year ago
I think it's kinda cool...
Johnyale McDaniel More than 1 year ago
Thanks
tony right More than 1 year ago
another one well written...you didn't give your ending away which will keep us reading...great job
Johnyale McDaniel More than 1 year ago
Thanks again... I'm just starting to share my writings so your comments are highly appreciated :)
Kimberley Brunette More than 1 year ago
Very nice and I see you having a meaning In your writing
Johnyale McDaniel More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much... i try to write with some substance
Kristin Reynolds More than 1 year ago
This has well rhyme and meter. It's passionate. Beautifully done. :)
Tammy Twomey More than 1 year ago
Loved it!
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