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PAIN IS A CHOCOLATE COATING

Pain is a chocolate coating
Embracing a candy;
You will never know whats inside
Is it a sweet love or minty hate confined;
Burst it open, tear them apart
To reveal whats in your heart.

Pain is a chocolate coating
Embracing a candy;
It may help you be a better person
Or it may kill your instead;
So if you met along your way
A person in pain in 10 years, or so
Judge her not because you can't say
How her pain made her better today.
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Poetry.com 3 out of 5 based on 2 votes.
Barb Dilworth More than 1 year ago
interesting concept, I quite like this.
Avery Eskridge More than 1 year ago
i didnt like her comparison to pain and chocolate little thought was put into this poem
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