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Dreamland

Lay down at night with empty thoughts,
Gazing so hard your casting spots.
In and out of deep thought you go,
Looking around, there's nothing you know.
Off in a world full of mortal existence,
Taking the path with the least resistance.
Futher and further you fall into void,
Frozen in limbo, you try to avoid.
Thoughts of temptation sweep on past,
Relaxing indefinite off at long last.
Float outward and pass out of view,
Released into dreamland, dreaming of...

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Dreamland, by Thomas Corrow 4.2 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 13 reviews.
Sweet Honey Dove More than 1 year ago
Taking the path with the least resistance

lovely rhymes
and
rhythms
dear poet
Jasmine Romanov More than 1 year ago
Excitedly spitefull
Ashaolu Solomon More than 1 year ago
wonderful poem
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
well done
Viviana Zoida More than 1 year ago
Dreaming of.... You!??? loved this BRAVO!!
Thomas Corrow 9 months ago
Correct...  
Sonja Carnes More than 1 year ago
Excellent work! Awesome, reading! 
Donald Patton More than 1 year ago
Well done!
Gary Gallegos More than 1 year ago
A different way of describing dreams.
amber talwar More than 1 year ago

Thoughts of temptation go past...

released into dreamland.....

Renata Edler More than 1 year ago
Very inspiring,  keep it up!!
Vezo Rhakho More than 1 year ago
nice poem...love the flow of the words
unknown feel More than 1 year ago
nice, keep it up
darren de leon More than 1 year ago
ok
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