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Lay down at night with empty thoughts,
Gazing so hard your casting spots.
In and out of deep thought you go,
Looking around, there's nothing you know.
Off in a world full of mortal existence,
Taking the path with the least resistance.
Futher and further you fall into void,
Frozen in limbo, you try to avoid.
Thoughts of temptation sweep on past,
Relaxing indefinite off at long last.
Float outward and pass out of view,
Released into dreamland, dreaming of...

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Dreamland, by Thomas Corrow 4.2 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 13 reviews.
Sweet Honey Dove 8 months ago
Taking the path with the least resistance

lovely rhymes
dear poet
Jasmine Romanov 8 months ago
Excitedly spitefull
Ashaolu Solomon 8 months ago
wonderful poem
ARUN MAZUMDER 8 months ago
well done
Viviana Zoida 8 months ago
Dreaming of.... You!??? loved this BRAVO!!
Thomas Corrow 4 months ago
Sonja Carnes 8 months ago
Excellent work! Awesome, reading! 
Donald Patton 8 months ago
Well done!
Gary Gallegos 8 months ago
A different way of describing dreams.
amber talwar 8 months ago

Thoughts of temptation go past...

released into dreamland.....

Renata Edler 8 months ago
Very inspiring,  keep it up!!
Vezo Rhakho 8 months ago
nice poem...love the flow of the words
unknown feel 8 months ago
nice, keep it up
darren de leon 8 months ago
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