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An Advice

One can't expect that his own blood can deceive
Against all sacrifices deceiving tricks will receive
What are the hurdles which make him perceive
Why new generation in doubt and hatred to believe

Young one play with the feelings of old as a right
If hypocrisy prevails no one stop deplorable plight
Sincerity is only value which can just help to fight
Mutual trust and confidence can bring all delight

Whether only parents only they are to pay price
Only they are destined to give just every sacrifice
Allow moments of love to overcome virtue over vice
Let this precise advice to take you to the paradise

Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Copyright 2017 Golden Glow





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An Advice, by Col Muhammad Khalid Khan 5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
Col Muhammad Khalid Khan 6 months ago
Nice
Sonja Carnes 6 months ago
Excellent work here! Beautifully written! Well said.
Col Muhammad Khalid Khan 6 months ago
Thanks Sonja
Robin Patir 6 months ago
Good
Col Muhammad Khalid Khan 6 months ago
Thanks Robin
Sweet Honey Dove 6 months ago
i love the way you
command your words
and take control
muhammad...nice
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