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DESTINY

DESTINY
Wooden handle of an axe exclaimed,
The day we build up alliance I am ruined.
All day long heavy duty I am performing
I am fade up and tired now I need retiring.
Thus the axe let gets rid of the wood lever
And made it released and happy forever.
The wood cutter saw the worthless handle
Put in the fireplace burning as like as fuel.
Now the worthless handle wood realize,
The working is far healthier than ablaze.
***ARUN MAZUMDER***
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DESTINY, by ARUN MAZUMDER 4.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 9 reviews.
Sonja Carnes 10 months ago
I really like this,Arun! An Horable Man needs and deserves his retirement! Excellent message!
Khyati Jobanputra 10 months ago
Good
amber talwar 10 months ago

He's tired and wants to retire

the wooden handle is burnt up released from. The axe...

ARUN MAZUMDER 10 months ago
The working is far healthier than ablaze.
Joshua Waldemayer 10 months ago
I like this poem a lot for it's good flow through and good buildup; it is overall an awesome poem.
Apollonia Don Ciccio 10 months ago
Nice
Yam-tin Martin Wong 10 months ago
however, people have to retire and relax when they reach a certain age.
Larry Stallings 10 months ago
good
Anna K 10 months ago
It's better to work than to die
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