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COMPREHENSION

COMPREHENSION
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Happy to receive your constant kind, care, and attention
Moral support brings on my face a genuine satisfaction
Nobody can sustain everyone all the time I may mention
So we should always be ready to build our comprehension

A competitor mind is a world class traveler
Judges are impartial to select the caliber
Class of society is free from ulterior motive
They act as catalyst free from an explosive

I share the message in poem as a carrier
Find good, sometimes bad or as an inferior
My mind wants to be the superior most
To help all to gain but nothing ever be lost

But how all wishful thinking can be in a personality
When Divine has made all things in duality
Rich-poor,envy-jealousy having no equality
Love-hate,day-night are existing reality

Let our sacred heart be free from fear
Let us behave as hero of life and be clear
Let our life continue till we achieve our goal
Let our family be happy as part of the whole

~~~~~Jawahar Gupta~~~~~

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COMREHENSION, by Jawahar Gupta 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 5 reviews.
Stella W 3 months ago

Let our family be happy as part of the whole...

life continue till we achieve our goal

An existing reality


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Jawahar Gupta 3 months ago
Thank u Stella
.Life is to live,
I would blossom every day of my life
Stay Well, Live Well’ 
Stella W 3 months ago
Blossom of the heart Jawahar...
Sonja Carnes 3 months ago
"Let our Scared heartbeat free        Amazing the balance,and truth in this piece!
From fear.                                              A true Masterpiece among your many poems!
Let us behave as hero of life
And be clear"
Jawahar Gupta 3 months ago
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Sweet Honey Dove 3 months ago
http://poetry.com/poems/1730946-Blooms
http://poetry.com/poems/1730580-PROTECTION-Haiku-

प्यार लालची नहीं है

मैं प्रतिस्पर्धी नहीं हूं
Naomi Rose 3 months ago
The finishing lines very powerful
Sanket Jain 3 months ago
Last 4 lines are superb, sir.
Carrier metaphor suits the poem. 
When you compared mind to a traveller, I am touched. Really our mind is a great traveller.

Sir, if you can oblige me by reviewing my few poems from page number 4&5.

http://www.poetry.com/poems/1715416-Laziness-a-Curse

http://www.poetry.com/poems/1715413-Girls-of-IX-C-2016-
Sweet Honey Dove 3 months ago
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