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Moonlight

I saw you in the moon light
My emotion made a flight

Night fell and rang the dream bell
New and unknown feeling scrolls

Felt like fish out of water
I couldn't understand what I pondered

Night seemed like a year
I had no more words to express the profound impact that night under the moonlight
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Moonlight, by Shobha Raman 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 6 reviews.
Hassen Gara 10 days ago
Beautifully written .Please review my Haiku http://poetry.com/poems/1756789-CREATIVITY.Thanks
Yalangi Queeny 10 days ago
It's as beautiful as moon#Simple #yet wandering in dreams
Shobha Raman 10 days ago
Floated in the world of dreams and wriggled like an eel
Sonja Carnes 10 days ago
Terrific work here
Andreas Simic 10 days ago
That is a wonderful line, as is this poem about nights and how some seem longer than others.
Well done.
Kim Joseph Delani 10 days ago
It brigghtens the night.
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