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Moonlight

I saw you in the moon light
My emotion made a flight

Night fell and rang the dream bell
New and unknown feeling scrolls

Felt like fish out of water
I couldn't understand what I pondered

Night seemed like a year
I had no more words to express the profound impact that night under the moonlight
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Moonlight, by Shobha Raman 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 6 reviews.
Yalangi Queeny 7 months ago
It's as beautiful as moon#Simple #yet wandering in dreams
Shobha Raman 7 months ago
Floated in the world of dreams and wriggled like an eel
Sonja Carnes 7 months ago
Terrific work here
Hassen Gara 7 months ago
Beautifully written .Please review my Haiku http://poetry.com/poems/1756789-CREATIVITY.Thanks
Andreas Simic 7 months ago
That is a wonderful line, as is this poem about nights and how some seem longer than others.
Well done.
Kim Joseph Delani 7 months ago
It brigghtens the night.
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