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With no mood

With no mood

The soul must remain
Sans pain
With no agony
And trusting only an almighty

You may feel hatred
And forced to be led
By destructive ideas
With intermittent pause

This develops confusion in mind
And you can’t find
Real answer to what is happening
It is only saddening

It is only temporary phenomenon
With total supremacy of demon
You are having defeated tendency
And forces to make no move immediately

You feel isolated
With mood not excited
Gloom has field day
But forget it for time being and get not carried away
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Naseem Abbas Muhammad 27 days ago
True!
With no mood, by Hasmukh Mehta 4.2 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 34 reviews.
Janakaraj Sivaram 6 months ago
good
ARUN MAZUMDER 6 months ago
good
Jasmine Romanov 6 months ago
And his cup filled over
Anastasia Hermiz 5 months ago
Gloom has field day 
But forget it for time being and get not carried away 

Beautiful.
Sweet Honey Dove 6 months ago
But forget it for time being and get not carried away 

true insight
dear hasmukh
excellent
!!
Mieft Aenzeish 26 days ago
... this sentence (But forget it for time being and get not carried away ) ...bring me to the new spirit.
Gary Wurtsmith 4 months ago

Very interesting

Flows very well. Last sentence creates a nice finish

kavita saraf 4 months ago
a very good one indeed
Suzanne Wells Villafuentes 4 months ago
Be blessed
Sherrie Kamerer-Wahrer 28 days ago
Golden
sonoo sonoo 26 days ago
good work.........
Marcey Igo 3 months ago
i like it, 
Karma 92 3 days ago
deep thought
Nikita Yadav 17 days ago
Deep thought.
Would love to hear your thoughts on my poem "Loneliness" as well :)

Ben Potts 13 days ago
Fantastic, deep and I relate even though Im much younger and just starting out. Great read and inspiring for me.
iamreppard 5 months ago
Dank
Edge Olalia 2 days ago
well done
J Beynon 6 months ago
Good job!
Donald Patton 6 months ago
Well written!
Sonja Carnes 6 months ago
This is different!
Gary Gallegos 6 months ago
Another good effort.
Andreas Simic 3 months ago
Yes life is indeed a rang of emotions including gloom. I am reminded of this quote. 

“Only when we have lived life fully can we take inventory, and say we are done.” Andreas Simi

Lisette Ruche 16 days ago
Loved all verses but the last. I like the topic but feel it had an abrupt ending with little transition. However, one's feelings can't be measured really.
Mohan Pillai 18 days ago
But don't get carried away
Rhymes 
Nice 
Sohel Bhattacharya 4 months ago
i want more poems
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