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With no mood

With no mood

The soul must remain
Sans pain
With no agony
And trusting only an almighty

You may feel hatred
And forced to be led
By destructive ideas
With intermittent pause

This develops confusion in mind
And you can’t find
Real answer to what is happening
It is only saddening

It is only temporary phenomenon
With total supremacy of demon
You are having defeated tendency
And forces to make no move immediately

You feel isolated
With mood not excited
Gloom has field day
But forget it for time being and get not carried away
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Naseem Abbas Muhammad 9 months ago
True!
With no mood, by Hasmukh Mehta 4.2 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 42 reviews.
Janakaraj Sivaram More than 1 year ago
good
Nikita Yadav 8 months ago
Deep thought.
Would love to hear your thoughts on my poem "Loneliness" as well :)

Ben Potts 8 months ago
Fantastic, deep and I relate even though Im much younger and just starting out. Great read and inspiring for me.
Anastasia Hermiz 12 months ago
Gloom has field day 
But forget it for time being and get not carried away 

Beautiful.
Mieft Aenzeish 9 months ago
... this sentence (But forget it for time being and get not carried away ) ...bring me to the new spirit.
kavita saraf 11 months ago
a very good one indeed
Sherrie Kamerer-Wahrer 9 months ago
Golden
iamreppard More than 1 year ago
Dank
Karma 92 7 months ago
deep thought
Shelly Welsh 7 months ago
well written.  Enjoyed it.
Edge Olalia 7 months ago
well done
Edward Granados 7 months ago
Nice hodge podge of thoughts and emotions, wow has me in thought. Nice..
sonoo sonoo 9 months ago
good work.........
Suzanne Wells Villafuentes 11 months ago
Be blessed
Jasmine Romanov More than 1 year ago
And his cup filled over
Marcey Igo 9 months ago
i like it, 
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
good
Gary Wurtsmith 11 months ago

Very interesting

Flows very well. Last sentence creates a nice finish

Sweet Honey Dove More than 1 year ago
But forget it for time being and get not carried away 

true insight
dear hasmukh
excellent
!!
Janine Joy Justo 6 months ago
a well written piece very inspiring.
Eligel Antwi 6 months ago
nice poem.kindly review my poems.thank you
Andreas Simic 10 months ago
Yes life is indeed a rang of emotions including gloom. I am reminded of this quote. 

“Only when we have lived life fully can we take inventory, and say we are done.” Andreas Simi

Sohel Bhattacharya 11 months ago
i want more poems
Sonja Carnes More than 1 year ago
This is different!
Gary Gallegos More than 1 year ago
Another good effort.
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