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With no mood

With no mood

The soul must remain
Sans pain
With no agony
And trusting only an almighty

You may feel hatred
And forced to be led
By destructive ideas
With intermittent pause

This develops confusion in mind
And you can’t find
Real answer to what is happening
It is only saddening

It is only temporary phenomenon
With total supremacy of demon
You are having defeated tendency
And forces to make no move immediately

You feel isolated
With mood not excited
Gloom has field day
But forget it for time being and get not carried away
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Naseem Abbas Muhammad 5 months ago
With no mood, by Hasmukh Mehta 4.2 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 42 reviews.
Janakaraj Sivaram 8 months ago
Anastasia Hermiz 7 months ago
Gloom has field day 
But forget it for time being and get not carried away 

Mieft Aenzeish 5 months ago
... this sentence (But forget it for time being and get not carried away ) ...bring me to the new spirit.
kavita saraf 7 months ago
a very good one indeed
Suzanne Wells Villafuentes 6 months ago
Be blessed
Sherrie Kamerer-Wahrer 5 months ago
sonoo sonoo 5 months ago
good work.........
Marcey Igo 5 months ago
i like it, 
Karma 92 3 months ago
deep thought
Shelly Welsh 3 months ago
well written.  Enjoyed it.
Edward Granados 3 months ago
Nice hodge podge of thoughts and emotions, wow has me in thought. Nice..
Jasmine Romanov 8 months ago
And his cup filled over
Nikita Yadav 4 months ago
Deep thought.
Would love to hear your thoughts on my poem "Loneliness" as well :)

Ben Potts 4 months ago
Fantastic, deep and I relate even though Im much younger and just starting out. Great read and inspiring for me.
iamreppard 8 months ago
Edge Olalia 3 months ago
well done
Gary Wurtsmith 7 months ago

Very interesting

Flows very well. Last sentence creates a nice finish

Sweet Honey Dove 9 months ago
But forget it for time being and get not carried away 

true insight
dear hasmukh
Eligel Antwi 18 days ago
nice poem.kindly review my poems.thank you
Janine Joy Justo 16 days ago
a well written piece very inspiring.
ARUN MAZUMDER 9 months ago
Andreas Simic 6 months ago
Yes life is indeed a rang of emotions including gloom. I am reminded of this quote. 

“Only when we have lived life fully can we take inventory, and say we are done.” Andreas Simi

Lisette Ruche 4 months ago
Loved all verses but the last. I like the topic but feel it had an abrupt ending with little transition. However, one's feelings can't be measured really.
Sohel Bhattacharya 7 months ago
i want more poems
Melodie Boyko 30 days ago
I got an incredibly good sense of the feeling behind the poem, missed a few word choices personally
But beautiful!
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