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This Ebony Veil

How do I shed this ebony veil
The moment of now relinquishes tomorrow
My mind said good-bye to the lifeless heart of the innocent
While still cradled within my arms my heart is unconvinced
The warmth and the essence has vanished into the soil
Weep softly now for all that lives does pass
No matter how brief or long
The departed soul instills the seed
Of awakening yielding the echoes of anguish
I know I cannot escape this ebony veil
It will be an unwanted companion years to endure
A looming reminder that a mother's love cannot defeat chance

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Sonja Carnes 10 months ago
My child is who died the day he was born!
This Ebony Veil, by Sonja Carnes 5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 6 reviews.
J Beynon 10 months ago
So sad :( but truly magnificent, from the grieving heart, sorry for the loss. But truly exquisite work nice word usage as well. You amaze me with every new write!
Sonja Carnes 9 months ago
J Thank You for your excellent review,this happened long ago, still feel the sting.Take Care
Friend I value your reviews,and support!
Dean Welch 10 months ago
Well written, very emotional poem. I am so sorry you lost your son. That, as a father is my greatest fear. 
Sonja Carnes 10 months ago
Dean, Thank you for your kind words. Parents or protector's of Thier children, we can only do so much.. You sound very kind ,and loving father. This Happened Many Years Ago!
It took a part of me that will never return. !

Subhashchandra Adhav 10 months ago
A well crafted poem leaving behind long lasting effect!
Wonderful write 
Nice read !
Excellent share !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 months ago
May blessing  be with you !!!
Sonja Carnes 10 months ago
Subhashchandra,thank you for your kind Words! I'd had a bad fall down the stairs
When they found me,I couldn't get up. It happened so long ago ,but he is in God's hands.
Thank You for your kind review! And blessings,as I wish for you! Blessings!
Jawahar Gupta 10 months ago
very profound
the Truth is..
Everything comes to an end
Sonja Carnes 10 months ago
Jawahar, this happened many years ago, I was found at the foot of the basement stairs
My son's placenta detached, he was alive at birth, but later he passed away . It was a real 
Nightmare. It took a part of me never to return.  Thank You for your kind words,your an 
Good person,and fine master of poetry!
Tay Bell 10 months ago
Good work 
Sonja Carnes 10 months ago
Tay, thank you for your kind words, this happened many years ago. Something the heart 
Does not come to terms with.
Sonja Carnes 10 months ago
To my son. Who died the same day he was born.
Tay Bell 10 months ago
Sorry to hear that 
Jawahar Gupta 10 months ago
sad TRUTH
was the case of STILL BIRTH?
Sonja
Sonja Carnes 10 months ago
Jawahar, I
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