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Youth – Part 2

Life’s all phases are boredom
Except the youth – the handsome.
The only stage full of chasm
Is none than of Soldier’s column.
Here we are full of sound strum
Which separate us from scum.
Our experience is a bit bantam;
Diminutive are we as an atom;
Teensy proficiency takes us bottom;
But Youth is centre of centrum
Centrum – the stages of life’s sum.
Hence, live ye youth with drum
And play a happy music album.
Youth is overwhelmingly awesome
So don’t be like a lamb dumb;
To live like a lively bird, come.
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Sanket Jain More than 1 year ago
Scum - Worthless people
Bantam – very small
Youth – Part 2, by Sanket Jain 4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
i love
the phases of Life,
Sanket,
I Love the most in your poem ,this part
Youth is overwhelmingly awesome 
So don’t be like a lamb dumb; 
To live like a lively bird, come. 
~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~
Sanket Jain More than 1 year ago
Thanks
Sanket Jain More than 1 year ago
Thanks for inspiring me in my ordeal.

I would be happy if you could review my few poems:
http://www.poetry.com/poems/1700601-Rhyme-On-Cherian-Sir

http://www.poetry.com/poems/1727396-Examinations-A-Devil-Part-3

http://www.poetry.com/poems/1697454-Rhyme-On-Rachana-Sharma
Sanket Jain More than 1 year ago
Hope readers will like my creative way of writing a poem. I had named it “Pari” – a style of writing Poetry where all ending words rhyme one another. This is a unique style which is being recognized by many critics through some sites. Thanks to those invisible hands and fingers which supported and inspired me to continue my efforts in my new, creative, artistic and innovative “Pari” style.

V. Paul Hall More than 1 year ago
I like this.  We only enjoy life when we have made an investment in life.  
Sanket Jain More than 1 year ago
Correctly said sir. This theme was taken from a poet whose poems I saw and reviewed.
Georgia Fowler 7 months ago
bit repetitive.
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