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"Few inches or miles away"

standing few inches away she asked
can I hug you for last
everything was still for a moment....
yet bouncing heart was shouting like hell
though frozen lips couldn't utter so well
holding all his emotions behind he took a tough call
and pretended this is not the right time at all
hearing it, she walked out
with great dolefulness he shout
but it was eleventh-hour
and she already disappeared....
however he couldn't let her tuck
so he ran down like a bullet just for a peek
the moment he reached there she was lost
bending on his knees he thought
"was she few inches away or miles apart"....


Akash batwaL


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"Few inches or miles away", by akash batwal 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 6 reviews.
Sonja Carnes 11 months ago
Well done,Akash!! Nice poem!
akash batwal 11 months ago
Thanks


ARUN MAZUMDER 11 months ago
good
akash batwal 11 months ago
ty
Akash Sharma 11 months ago
good
akash batwal 11 months ago
ty
akash batwal 11 months ago
in love with this
new fvrt !!!
akash batwal 11 months ago
..
Anamika Vyas Batwal 11 months ago
Great
Larry Stallings 11 months ago
interesting
akash batwal 11 months ago
thnxx
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