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"Few inches or miles away"

standing few inches away she asked
can I hug you for last
everything was still for a moment....
yet bouncing heart was shouting like hell
though frozen lips couldn't utter so well
holding all his emotions behind he took a tough call
and pretended this is not the right time at all
hearing it, she walked out
with great dolefulness he shout
but it was eleventh-hour
and she already disappeared....
however he couldn't let her tuck
so he ran down like a bullet just for a peek
the moment he reached there she was lost
bending on his knees he thought
"was she few inches away or miles apart"....


Akash batwaL


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"Few inches or miles away", by akash batwal 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 6 reviews.
akash batwal More than 1 year ago
in love with this
new fvrt !!!
akash batwal More than 1 year ago
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Anamika Vyas Batwal More than 1 year ago
Great
Sonja Carnes More than 1 year ago
Well done,Akash!! Nice poem!
akash batwal More than 1 year ago
Thanks


ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
good
akash batwal More than 1 year ago
ty
Akash Sharma More than 1 year ago
good
akash batwal More than 1 year ago
ty
Larry Stallings More than 1 year ago
interesting
akash batwal More than 1 year ago
thnxx
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