Fr_t's comments

Every time I hit the edit button a different poem appears.

Thank you very much ggsunmoon. I am off this week, and will dedicate some time to that line. I am so grateful for that encouraging critique.

Great insight about where the child within needs to be.

I hope the person I voted for wins. She had an excellent poem.

Thanks robertrad2021 for your kind affirmation. I know there's a huge typo, but I haven't figured out how to be able to edit it. But I guess the message is still the same.

Tim

Thanks for you message, Dougla$. I have the sense that you are a more prolific writer of poetry than I am. I write when the Spirit moves me, which hasn't been much lately. If it is possible that I can be notified when you write a new poem, I will look forward to discussing it with you. I would be glad to do the same for you. Our religious beliefs/denominations are not an issue for me at all. Keep writing. Tim more »

Thank you, Soulwriter. Not many people characterize me as eloquent, but I have to say, I sorta like how Dawn turned out. Keep on writing!