Snowpagg01's comments

This is such a lovely well written poem that kept my attention to the last word. It is a feel good story. I feel this is a poem that would be enjoyed by children as well as adults. Mostly I chose this poem because at the end... I smiled inside and out. more »

This is a new experience for me. I write poetry almost everyday and this is my first submission to a contest. Be gentle folks... be gentle.

I could hardly breathe or see at the end. Beautiful. The pain of loss will always be overwhelming but your heart will always be filled with his memory.