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I've been writing for over 25 years. Rah.

  January 2022     7 hours ago

Submitted Poems 48 total

I Shall Not Be Small (5 syllable meter)

When he was a boy,
Life was dramatic --
He learned to be small
Safe in the attic.

Invisible child,
As slight as his word,
Made to be silent,
A shadow unheard.

Talk was restricted,
Speaking forbidden --
He dared not a peep,
His...

by Steven Dupere

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Soldier

Redemption comes and goes for the broken,
A life we lived of wounds unspoken.
We’ve spilled our blood for another man’s glory.
Now we live to tell our story.

In the end what was it for?
We gave ourselves for another man’s war.
The walls we...

by Steve Dupere

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Mortally Wounded: A Soldier's Tale

Imagine the glory of a love so mighty as
to inspire the hopeless to suffer the agony
of one more breath.


 
Mortally Wounded; A Soldier's Tale

He is bloody, fading and shattered,
Disabled, alone by himself --
His body's...

by Steven Dupere

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PTSD - The Soldier and the Bottle

Sands of time have brought us down
For blood we’ve spilled upon the ground
Promises were given and lies were told
Was the bill of goods that we were sold

They pin their medals and offer us pride
But the ones who lived are the ones who...

by Steven Dupere

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War Torn

There’s a sprawling field rife with crosses
Peppered black with fading names
In memory of those who paid the price
Of war's barbaric games

In an overrun creek desolate and dry
Neath a sea of blood-red sheen
Is an outskirt of a wind-blown...

by Steven Dupere

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added 6 months ago
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Thank ya, bud. Hope all'z well. As for Chuck - I'd flip him like a cheese omelet. ;-P

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I see what you did there. Let's face it I'm no Dave Chappelle but not for a lack of effort. Thanks for the chuckism. :-P

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Therein lay the irony and that we incur growth from having overcome all such tribulation. I appreciate your kind words. Thank you very much.

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Thank you, Suzie. You're a darling.

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Only had to bribe three for the showing, so who am I to complain a few Benjamins into a 3rd place slot. Sometimes a dude gotta flex a little cashola to get the people pointed in a direction. On a serious note, I very much appreciate the kind words. At this rate I'll be out of debt by 2040. See you on the playground, brother. 

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Like I just said to Sue, I knew this one lost a bit of feel, but the syllabic meter, I believe, may have compensated. I wanted to convey the sentiment without losing too much heart, so this one was a push-pull for sure. Still a line or two I'm not crazy about, but I can work on that later. As always, your opinion is valued and valuable as is your talent to be commended. 

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Mine came out okay. It loses a bit of flare in keeping with the five-syllable meter, but what it lacks in depth I believe is compensated for via technique. Great job, Sue. You rock.

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Thank you very much, Kim. That means a lot. :-)

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This was a challenge for sure with the 5 syllabic meter, but I loved the entire process. Thank you very much for the vote. I appreciate it.

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Your words humble me. Your response is so well articulated and thought out. This is one of the best comments I've ever gotten. Thank you.

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Thank you so much, Betsy. You are too kind.

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Congrats, Debra. Great job! :-)

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You are such a showoff. But I forgive you since you're also an amazing poet. ;-)

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Beautiful writing. And that my name is used only makes the decision easier. Well done. ;-)

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True poetry written by a true poet. Beautiful work, Ludy.

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