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  December 2023     3 months ago

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A Hungry Squirrel and a Ripen Apple

A Hungry Squirrel And A Ripened Apple

In front of varandah

  With a gushing sound,
Quickly awoke me up.

  A hungry squirrel lurking
On top of my attic rooftop

  ...

– by Dips Lawati

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My Dear Papa

Dear papa, now it’s become a score,
Sometimes you appear in my dream,
That same love, food, dress and nothing more.

Why do you yourself not at trimmed?
Yesterday you again came
‘You must learn wise,’ you said.
Book of gold you hid me,
Black...

– by Dips Lawati

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A Hungry Squirrel And an Ripen Apple

In front of my varandah,

  With a gushing sound,
Quickly awoke me up.

  A hungry squirrel lurking
On the top my attic roof

  Made me attention.
Before a run on my stick,

  Vanished...

– by Dips Lawati

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Hi,
Why should we write at times n again in which my name had been already enrolled? Yes for a new one, it is ok for the title n it’s about but here it says to write biography n so on.
I would request the team should check it out n correct it. Yes for the first time, one must have to do . Since I was a member of earlier poetry.com where lost 100s of my poetry. They certainly closed without kenning me.
Dips 

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Have a glance!

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So profound n brilliant! I ken that reading a poetry for the first time an ought to be like a man meeting for the first time…Any way when I leisure I’ll go deeply in yr poem
Thanks

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Exquisite! Please share mine too

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