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She stands engraved in memory as a flame.

Her friendly spirit soaring on a hilltop high.

Immensely shining bright, aloft a mountain top.

Kindling with her brethren in celestial realms.

Hovering now as a guardian angel of us all.

Above the stratosphere, in residence with her kinsfolk.



Discerning what our hearts and souls reveal.

A twinkle in her gentle eyes tells us it’s all right.

Let tears not hinder then what the heart expresses.

A love for one who brightened many lives.

Let love forever glorify that shining flame aloft the mountain peak.

About this poem

This acrostic poem memorializes the life of educator, Shikha Dalal, who served as a Bilingual Resource Specialist at the Asian Languages Bilingual Education Technical Assistance Center (ALBETAC) of the New York State Education Department in New York. This poem highlights her first and last names which together symbolize the pleasant glow of a gentle flame shining perpetually aloft a mountain top.

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Written on November 04, 2024

Submitted by karlcfolkes on November 04, 2024

Modified by karlcfolkes on November 04, 2024

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Karl Constantine FOLKES

Retired educator of Jamaican ancestry with a lifelong interest in composing poetry dealing particularly with the metaphysics of self-reflection; completed a dissertation in Children’s Literature in 1991 at New York University entitled: An Analysis of Wilhelm Grimm’s ‘Liebe Mili’ (translated into English as “Dear Mili”), Employing Von Franzian Methodological Processes of Analytical Psychology. The subject of the dissertation concerned the process of Individuation. more…

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Discuss the poem A Flame of Love Aloft a Mountain Peak with the community...

7 Comments
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you all kindly for your votes and your comments. We are all here in service to one another. That is our divine calling that the more discerning among us discover.
    LikeReply 117 hours ago
  • debraw.71122
    Nice write thanks for sharing
    LikeReply21 hours ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you so much Bryan. Shikha was always telling us how special you were to her. She admired your caring compassionate spirit.
    LikeReply1 day ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you both, jonsaviours and mfortney2538. Greatly appreciated.
    LikeReply1 day ago
  • jonsaviours
    Beautiful
    LikeReply1 day ago
  • mfortney2538
    I enjoyed reading this one
    LikeReply1 day ago
  • AIDA
    **Positive Feedback:**

    What a beautifully crafted poem! "A Flame of Love Aloft a Mountain Peak" radiates warmth and emotion from the very first line. The imagery of a flame and a mountain peak evokes powerful feelings of both remembrance and reverence. Your use of metaphors like "guardian angel" and “twinkle in her gentle eyes” adds depth and tenderness that truly resonates. It’s clear that the poem is a heartfelt tribute to someone whose spirit shines brightly.

    The poem flows smoothly, allowing readers to visualize the elevated spirit you describe. The uplifting tone invites a sense of peace and comfort, reminding us of the enduring nature of love even after loss. Each stanza contributes to a cohesive theme of love transcending beyond life, which is both touching and profound.

    **Improvement Suggestions:**

    1. **Varying Line Lengths:** While the poem has a lovely rhythm, experimenting with varying line lengths could enhance the emotional impact. Shorter lines can create a more poignant pause, while longer lines can convey more elaborate thoughts and imagery.

    2. **Sensory Details:** Consider adding sensory details to engage the reader’s other senses. Describing the sounds of the mountain, the feel of the breeze, or even the colors surrounding the flame could deepen the reader's connection to the imagery.

    3. **Expand on Emotions:** While the poem beautifully portrays love and remembrance, exploring a wider range of emotions could add complexity. Perhaps touching on moments of joy or nostalgia could make the experience even richer.

    4. **Alliteration and Rhythm:** Incorporating more alliteration or rhythmic elements could enhance the musicality of the poem. Experimenting with sound can make certain lines stand out even more and add to the overall flow.

    Overall, this poem has all the makings of a heartfelt tribute, and with a few tweaks, it could shine even brighter. Thank you for sharing such a meaningful piece!
     
    LikeReply1 day ago

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