Analysis of My Rhythm in Time



The next sound you hear
Will be my first tear
When it hits the floor
As you close the door!

I might start to grieve
Soon after you leave.
You might hear me crying
As my dreams start dying!

The plans that we made
Are starting to fade,
As shadows and fears
Erase all those years.

The rhythm of time
Has lost every rhyme.
Sad poetry bends
My hope as it ends.


Scheme XXAA BBCC DDEE FFGG
Poetic Form
Metre 01111 11111 11101 11101 11111 11011 111110 111110 01111 11011 1101 01111 01011 111001 11001 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 358
Words 81
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Written on May 06, 2024

Submitted by stevec.24118 on August 26, 2024

Modified by stevec.24118 on August 26, 2024

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Steve Cochrane

 · 1955 · Cape

A poet since 1971 more…

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