into the maelstrom



.
my inner demons are awake
and they're far from happy
.
woken from their fetid slumber
by the untimely arrival
of a filthy cloud of angry hornets
similarly thrown into unenvied territory
at the wrong end of a fiery, pointed stick
.
the protagonists clash
in an unholy maelstrom
of writhing fury
as screeching thunderbolts of black, yellow and hot white
etch their bitter slogans on the walls
of the twisted corridors
of my inner sanctum
throwing up clouds of unholy smoke
which sting my eyes
.
again
and again
and again
.
finally ..
when all seems lost
my body responds
and the usurpers are thrown
without trial -
into the pit from whence they came
for now ..
.

About this poem

I'm not used to pain, but rather than buckle under the weight of this terrifyingly painful, late night episode during a recent hospital stay; I decided to describe it in an effort to distract myself from it. Never has it been more true that pain stirs my muse.

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Written on January 07, 2022

Submitted by Scrivo on January 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Characters 662
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Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 32

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