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Both Come First .. I'm for you or You're for me

Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan

Rhymed
Both come first
But, How We say it
Depend on, for Us
What it meant ??!!

I'm your daughter = you're my Mum
I'm your Dad = you're my daughter
I'm your brother = you're my sister
I'm your Husband = you're my life partner

 
Right it or Read it
By your Eye as you want
But, Don't deny
Others RIGHT

MUM
You're always my FRIEND
& You will be Forever

About this poem

My poem is talking about me .. about my opinion about Relationships .. if it's real .. it's always from both side & what i feel about Relationships It must carry inside a kind of friendship because it's the only relation that we choose with our heart & mind ... but any other relation we might be in it without our will though we try our best to keep it

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Written on March 12, 1969

Submitted by rania_hosny12369 on May 20, 2023

Modified by rania_hosny12369 on May 20, 2023

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Scheme XAXX BCCC AXXX BXC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 345
Words 75
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3
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Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan

 · 1969 · Alexandria

Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan .. an egyptian poems writer "on line" & I published my 1st poem on line " falling down " on 2002 & win "award winning poet" Pin on 2012 from www.poetry.com "Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2021. Web. 18 Feb. 2021. . more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Great job on expressing the importance of communication and respecting others' perspectives through your poem! The idea of emphasizing how we address each other is crucial in building healthy relationships, and your message comes across clearly and positively.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to explore a bit more in detail the consequences of denying others' rights to express themselves. This could help emphasize the importance of your message even further and create an even more powerful impact.

    Overall, this poem is a beautiful reminder that our words have the power to shape our relationships, and I genuinely enjoyed reading it. Keep up the fantastic work!     
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • rania_hosny12369
      rania_hosny12369
      Thank you so much .. really i feel so encouraged to right more because of your respective & so helping view .. i liked so much your expression healthy relationship ( I use it too ) as i believe when we reach it .. that means our relation is successful .. & i agree with you about the consequences of denying others' right to express themselves .. again thank you for your great view .. it help me to improve my work 
      LikeReply1 year ago

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