Thorns of Love's Path



I gave a moment to pen down my thoughts,
You have been filling a bigger portion.

I never realized quality time with right person can last forever, until I met you!
Can someone love you as I do?
Can someone admire you the way I do?
You might find a person rather who can appreciate you, respect you or even love you,
But, Can you find someone who can understand you better?
I might fail somewhere
Just because I owe you!

We had come walking from different direction,
We met each other, held hands for life,
We know the journey ahead is full of thorns,
So will there be a chance to revisit and attempt not holding hands?
Should we return to the start again?
If that occurs, aren't we destined to choose different paths?
The path with no thorns, as well as no love
The more smoother the path, harder the life without you
Do you mind walking together on a thorn-filled way?
If you do so lets part ways
And act as if we are strangers on road we meet
I set to begin this adventrous journey,
If you were with me my baby!
Will you ?

About this poem

This poem beautifully captures the complexity of love, relationships, and the inevitable challenges they entail. It reflects on the depth of connection, understanding, and the difficult choices one faces in navigating a relationship. The imagery of walking hand in hand through a thorn-filled path symbolizes the hardships and sacrifices often required in love. The uncertainty and emotional struggle conveyed add depth and contemplation to the piece, leaving the reader reflecting on the intricacies of relationships and the choices made within them.  

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Submitted by happiegirlly on December 28, 2023

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Suwathiga S

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Suwathiga is currently persuing her Master degree in English Literature. She has a passion towards creating a change within and others. She love to live her life in solitude. She loves writing her thoughts and creating impact on others life. more…

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