ronniefox
  Bronze Member

I like this poem, it's well written and very insightful. Good job.

I love the poem. It's beautiful and I agree with the message. You're a terrific poet.

A well written albeit sad poem. It stirs compassion in those who read it.

I like the poem. It's interesting.

I agree. I'm a lucky adoptee and I found a wonderful family that loved me. My brother who I found wasn't as lucky. He was in and out of foster homes and the orphanage until he turned 18, then he was aged out of the system to fend for himself. I just thought what that would feel like and wrote the poem. more »

Thank you. I just write what I believe.

Beautifully written. Great job.

Thank you

Beautiful, I love the imagery and emotion that the poem invokes.

I enjoyed your poem and I feel you're dead on point. The poem is well written.

I like the poem, even though it is kind of depressing. You bring the feelings of the poem to life. Good job.