chellebelle77
  Bronze Member

I love this piece and had it pinned on my shortlist. You do incredible work, and I am in awe of each piece you share. Keep doing you, Steven, because it's extraordinary.

Nice work.

Great job! Well deserved

I love the story painted in this poem. The love hate relationship between Brandy/Kershall/Jen(Brandy) is so fascinating. Well done!

Thank you for this! It's a witty dose of needed truth.

I don't understand the lure of AI poetry. As a curious person, I played with prompts once just to see what I'd get, and everything that spit out was horrible. You can't fake your way into a masterpiece. It is a prize only attained through bearing your deepest self.

I commend you for writing to address such an issue. more »

It is beautiful. I'm in a slump- can't get my brain to put anything out.

I could feel the deafening silence between the fighting couple. It was unbearably loud. I loved how I was at that breakfast table with them.

Thank you very much.

This is a lovely poem. The pictures you paint are magical.

I would love to read it. Please let me know if you ever decide to post it.

This seems particularly valid with the issues that have come to light in the last few days. A lovely work.

The personification of death as a cat is so wonderful. The cat-like behaviors picture perfect in my mind.

Thank you so ver much. I wanted to highlight how the dread of family gatherings (in my case the smoker must) is easily forgotten when everyone lets loose and starts to enjoy the time together.

Beautifully heartbreaking.

This is such a heartbreaking but beautiful tribute. The depth of your heart and soul laid bare for all is such a powerful connector. Thank you for sharing this painful time in your life journey.