rameshs.88917
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me humbled, tnx .

Very nice masterpiece on festival quite relevant to to the season. In every Winter, New York gets new shape ornamented with colourful lights, decoration, There is no limit of happiness among the people and everyone is busy with religious activities. This holy festival celebrated in huge and people scatter the seed of philanthropy, humanity and friendship. I admire your uses of literary devices like similes, imageries, metaphors to the colour the ode. Me from India but I know little about the the Son of God coming and bless everyone.Merry Christmas Luciana. more »

ma humil'e

Impressive lyric on Winter and I like very much the way your treated the season. My favourite season and I appreciate your literary art that provides wonderful promises of abstract quality of human beings.We should learn many things from the winter season. Congratulations dear poetess for beautiful lyric. more »

It is humble request to poetry team to read my composition and do support for popularity please.

Magic lines on infancy, the way you placed the poem and gestures of the Lord ,feel as if the toy is playing and calling us to play with him .I am overwhelmed reading and enjoying the lyric. Everytime I enjoy literary terms like metaphors, similes and its appropriateness in lucid lines. Congratulations. more »

Madam, I extended my heartfelt gratefulness to thy magnificent quotes. Hope your guidance lead me to the good Position in poetry field .

Very nice poem on emotions, experiences and development of gratitude towards your family members. Your way of expressing consolation and confession of loss is also notable.We are the puppets in the hands of Omnipotent and bound to accept His ultimate Judgement. more »

dear poet Yesterday I put my comments on this poem but it is not showing?

Extremely explortive master piece as it stands as destroyer of war and preserver of peace, philanthropy among the modern people. Congratulations respected poet.

Extremely ecstasy,I am able to get 10 / 10 . Thanks poetry team for providing this platform to test our GK of literature.

I could hardly make out the head and tail of the poem and dare to comment .It is too exploring master piece. The way you presented the life with metaphor, Swan , imageries, simile, struggling and and searc for existence are really striking my mind. The Shakespearean pattern of rhyming scheme is outstanding. The reconciliation with the situation and and endeavour with optimistic mind set up is not individual but universal human phenomena. Overall,the poem is most reflective, absurdity and searc for meaning of life is really appreciable to the modern man. I too appreciate the the overflow of ornamented poetic devices.Congratulations dear poet. more »

Excited to get 9/10 , a little bit of gk of literary knowledge improved.

heartfelt gratefulness, it's ur simplicity and greatness.

Most motivational poem, Right we should collect the seed of the Rose
as the rose blooms with smiling face today, will not bloom tomorrow. Life is full ups and downs. If night cames can day far behind. I like your optimistic message from the lines. Congratulations. more »