Analysis of B-U-Busy

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



It is healthy to stay busy.

Remove that 'WHY' right out of your life.
And...
Choose something different,
To try you might like.
B-u-busy.

Forget what other people,
May think of you.
Do something different,
Without them to approve or give attitude.
Stop that queasy quizzing feeling,
Squeezing life from you.
B-u-busy.
And decide this you will do.
B-u-busy.
Stop procrastinating,
Like so many others choose.
Doing nothing more than that,
To hope you do it too!
Be you one who's busy.
Finding more in life to like.
Be you one Just too busy.
Finding more in life to like.
And...
This you will.
Find more in life to like.
Yes...
This you will.
Find more in life to like.
This...
I bet you will!


Scheme a xBcdA xecxfeAeAfxxeaDaDBGDxGDxg
Poetic Form
Metre 11101110 011111111 0 110100 11111 1110 0111010 1111 110100 0111011110 11101010 10111 1110 011111 1110 10100 1110101 1010111 111111 111110 1010111 1111110 1010111 0 111 110111 1 111 110111 1 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 727
Words 169
Sentences 29
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 25
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 173
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Written on August 15, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on August 15, 2022

Modified by lpahtillah on August 15, 2022

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