Analysis of My time is not far



My time is not far
So I’ll dance with the dead
Bless the lives lived through the trees
This spirit inside so happily cries
I’ll watch over your enemies
You’re as free as can be
With the earth underneath
Till the sacred time you return
By gods demand
A clock has no hands
To be is to love is to learn
So I’ll breathe this gift
And drink from this spring
I’ve lived well although I’ve done wrong
Each merciful moment
Awake in my mind
Says every second, so long
Let me give what I can
It’s not mine anyways
To the ones I care the most
Deduct from my privileged
Existence of soul
Just to know that it still runneth over
Let me pray for a kiss
And even if missed
Knowing smiles was worth the journey
Sweet ignorant bliss
Can we all lay claim
Morrow eyes to come with each turning
And giveth a name
Reverberant grace
The zenith is yours and alike
Watch the new star alight
Forevers surprise
the world holds us so close
For love never dies.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111 111101 1011101 1100111001 11101100 111111 10101 10101101 1101 01111 11111111 11111 01111 1111111 110010 01011 11001011 111111 11110 1011101 011110 01011 111111110 111101 01011 10111010 11001 11111 101111110 01001 11 01011001 101101 101 011111 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 964
Words 198
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 36
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 743
Words per stanza (avg) 182

About this poem

A reflection on my life, my love for people, my spirituality and the acceptance of having to one day leave my family behind in the physical world.

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Written on April 29, 2023

Submitted by cokerrogers on May 18, 2023

Modified by cokerrogers on May 20, 2023

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