Analysis of LOOK IN YOUR EYES

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



I look into your eyes for the answers to what love should be. You allowed me to be my fault, and when I needed you the most, you answered that call. You know that I am a dreamer wanting it all, but when I slip into a kiss on your lips, you have me wanting the world and so much more.

I was always told that boy, you got a gypsy soul, but your love is that hollow feeling that needs to be said. Oh, baby, I am in that mood where I drink to forget, but that look in your eyes makes my body sweat.

Hold me tight, for you know I'm in the fight of my life, and you didn't fall in love with a fool. You fell in love with a man wanting to rule and set the world free.

I thought everything had lost meaning until I found you. The love we found we can not explain. I guess this is what it is like when the world collides. You can call me yours I will call you mine


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Characters 859
Words 189
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 163
Words per line (avg) 46
Letters per stanza (avg) 163
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Written on July 18, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on July 18, 2023

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mad hippie poet

I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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