Analysis of Together we Are

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



Tender under an umbrella reaching for you to stay dry. In love we are and the happiness and joy bursts out of my skin. Where did you come from you are my everything and I can't live without you. The showers turn into droplets of rainbow and only fall on us. Honey you are a force that has become part of my flowing blood. I can't contain the joy you give me and I Thank you.


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Characters 374
Words 76
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 291
Words per line (avg) 76
Letters per stanza (avg) 291
Words per stanza (avg) 76

About this poem

The life force daily for me is my wife of almost 44yrs.

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Written on September 30, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on September 30, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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