Analysis of Would I Be Invisible (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Would I Be Invisible   (Bussokusekika)

I am not famous
I find solace in knowing
Nobody knows me
I can go out in public
Were I a well known poet
Would I be invisible

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/10/2023


Scheme A XAXAXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11101001 11110 1110010 111 1111010 0101110 1110100 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 209
Words 41
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 52
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

I guess that fame has its price…The stars light up the night…In space which is dark and cold…I took a ride in a quest for a new sweater to keep me warm…I’m at La Cumbre Plaza…Who knows were the journey nay end…Quail and fish tacos may even be a possibility…Only time will tell…

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Written on December 10, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 10, 2023

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