Analysis of Are You Happy Now Marlene (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Are You Happy Now Marlene   (Bussokusekika)

It’s not everyday
I feel I must eat my words
When I spoke of her
She was not a simple knife
She was a freaking razor
Are you happy now Marlene

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/20/2023


Scheme X XXAXAX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 11101 1111111 11110 1110101 1101010 111011 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 232
Words 44
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

I don’t think I would have felt the initial cut…But I fear I would have bled to death before anyone could have saved me…Was that the finest Arabian in your stable Marlene???Don’t get me wrong…She was truly a beauty…But IF she would of had an identical twin…

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Written on December 10, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 10, 2023

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