Analysis of I used to dance

Michelle Ritchie 1981 (Aberdeen)



I used to dance
Everyday
Now I only dream
I envisage the movements
 Falling Into a trance
Wishing I could move that way
 My motions making me gleam
Alas.
I no longer dance
 I no longer twirl
I no longer walk
Was still only a girl
 I was that beauty Inside and out
 That tried to extinguish Her life With tablets and a knife
It is art That has healed me
Let my express myself
Filled my heart With love and self wealth
 i long to dance
But I never will again
So instead I dance with my paper and pen


Scheme ABCDABCEAFGFHIJKLAMM
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111 101 11101 1010010 100101 1011111 1101011 01 11101 11101 11101 111001 111100101 11101001110001 1111111 11011 11111011 1111 1110101 10111111001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 510
Words 114
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 390
Words per stanza (avg) 101

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Results of self harm

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Written on December 22, 2023

Submitted by ritchiechelle on December 21, 2023

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